Some people think that parents should teach children how to be good members of society. Others, however, believe that school is the place to learn this.
Discuss both these views and give your won opinion.
It is commonly believe that to be a good part of the community, children should be taught from home. However, some people argue that school is the capable institution to deliver this lesson. In my opinion, parents have the most important role to build character and to prepare the children to enter the community.
On one hand, school has facilities and tools to learn many things, including character building lessons. In other words, this institution is capable to deliver the moral message to be directly implemented to the daily practice. For instance, to teach children to greet everyone they met with smile they could practice it at school with teacher and friends. This circumstance demonstrates the enabling environment for children to learn something.
On the other hand, children could imitate everything that everyone around them has done because they could absorb information quickly. To explain further, children is a fast learner. For example, if children are asked to not interrupt people when they are speaking, they will obey the rule as long as the parents give them example. If parents teach them how to be a good citizen, they will easily follow, as a result it is clear that this method is effective to build a good person.
Furthermore, character building is a long haul process, spanning from baby to adult. By this I mean, the earlier the education is started, the better result that will be gained. As an illustration, if children has planted a belief in their mind, they will have difficulties to adopt another views from school if it is different with practice at home. Therefore, the most significant education is what they learn at home. If children are prepared to have the strong foundation at home, the will ready to enter the bigger community outside the family and contribute more to the environment.
In conclusion, even though there are pros and cons in this issues, in my opinion, the benefits to give examplatory from home outweigh the drawbacks to be able to create a good character. If children are taught by parents as earliest as possible, they will have strong personality and more than ready to contribute more to the society.
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 16, Rule ID: BEEN_PART_AGREEMENT[2]
Message: Consider using a past participle here: 'believed'.
Suggestion: believed
It is commonly believe that to be a good part of the community...
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Line 7, column 102, Rule ID: THE_EXACTLY_THE[1]
Message: Duplicated 'the' in the phrase: 'the earlier the'. Did you mean 'earlier the'?
Suggestion: earlier the
...ing from baby to adult. By this I mean, the earlier the education is started, the better result...
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Line 9, column 55, Rule ID: THIS_NNS[1]
Message: Did you mean 'these'?
Suggestion: these
... even though there are pros and cons in this issues, in my opinion, the benefits to ...
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Discourse Markers used:
['but', 'furthermore', 'however', 'if', 'so', 'therefore', 'for example', 'for instance', 'i mean', 'in conclusion', 'as a result', 'in my opinion', 'in other words', 'on the other hand']
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance in Part of Speech:
Nouns: 0.235294117647 0.247107548796 95% => OK
Verbs: 0.178921568627 0.15552993741 115% => OK
Adjectives: 0.0710784313725 0.0946569551029 75% => OK
Pronouns: 0.0490196078431 0.0437536398559 112% => OK
Prepositions: 0.107843137255 0.122223957237 88% => OK
Participles: 0.0294117647059 0.0403219363162 73% => OK
Conjunctions: 2.70947130511 2.80592935109 97% => OK
Infinitives: 0.0637254901961 0.0326786765898 195% => Too many infinitives.
Particles: 0.0 0.00163938923432 0% => More particles wanted.
Determiners: 0.0980392156863 0.0861751148067 114% => OK
Modal_auxiliary: 0.0245098039216 0.0214082191602 114% => OK
WH_determiners: 0.00980392156863 0.0119246538136 82% => OK
Vocabulary words and sentences:
No of characters: 2180.0 1933.38276553 113% => OK
No of words: 365.0 316.052104208 115% => OK
Chars per words: 5.95628415301 6.10592293882 98% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.37092360658 4.20519365927 104% => OK
words length more than 5 chars: 0.353424657534 0.37474360046 94% => OK
words length more than 6 chars: 0.284931506849 0.284197041944 100% => OK
words length more than 7 chars: 0.216438356164 0.203843217982 106% => OK
words length more than 8 chars: 0.112328767123 0.137313986986 82% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.70947130511 2.80592935109 97% => OK
Unique words: 178.0 176.041082164 101% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.487671232877 0.560935902166 87% => OK
Word variations: 51.3660135712 60.7401812628 85% => OK
How many sentences: 18.0 16.0911823647 112% => OK
Sentence length: 20.2777777778 20.7725350517 98% => OK
Sentence length SD: 37.0498912879 49.5273876611 75% => OK
Chars per sentence: 102.454308094 93.4120437189 110% => OK
Words per sentence: 17.1540469974 15.2821509519 112% => OK
Discourse Markers: 0.657963446475 0.594174754866 111% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.39078156313 114% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 5.01102204409 60% => OK
Readability: 48.7709284627 49.1922392462 99% => OK
Elegance: 1.40740740741 1.69127372897 83% => OK
Coherence and Cohesion:
Topic essay coherence: 0.418232162504 0.332604825255 126% => OK
Sentence sentence coherence: 0.089050334315 0.102734651613 87% => OK
Sentence sentence coherence SD: 0.0533666412872 0.0668474354756 80% => OK
Sentence paragraph coherence: 0.551325687937 0.534917948617 103% => OK
Sentence paragraph coherence SD: 0.125052597085 0.148666948902 84% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.171794687014 0.13441755203 128% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0755820077872 0.0742828286743 102% => OK
Paragraph paragraph coherence: 0.403064889777 0.324241079732 124% => OK
Paragraph paragraph coherence SD: 0.0487776728383 0.0640056729886 76% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.290828096042 0.22793763319 128% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0798007909637 0.0582452615562 137% => OK
Task Achievement:
Sentences with positive sentiment : 14.0 8.68436873747 161% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 3.9879759519 25% => More negative sentences wanted.
sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.41883767535 88% => OK
Positive topic words: 13.0 5.88977955912 221% => Too many positive topic words.
Negative topic words: 1.0 2.60220440882 38% => More negative topic words wanted.
Neutral topic words: 2.0 2.00200400802 100% => OK
Total topic words: 16.0 10.493987976 152% => OK
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Rates: 65.4175824176 out of 100
Scores by essay E-rater: 6.0 Out of 9