With science emerging and human housing standards and demands increasing, online shopping is gradually becoming a mainstream solution, as it is the most convenient and economical way to make purchases. From my point of view, online purchasing has some advantages that outweigh its drawbacks.
Firstly, online shopping saves us a lot of time and money on transport. The Internet allows us to purchase items without having to travel. It has become seamless for us to obtain anything we want, without leaving our homes or offices, with a few clicks of the mouse. As usual, humans want to travel to many distinctive sorts of retail outlets to look for a variety of merchandise. Moreover, online shopping has an extensive assortment of merchandise available on its website that meets our demands and will have all of it delivered to your home.
Second, shopping online for gadgets allows us to keep track of our expenses. Thanks to the variety of materials, consumers are allowed to compare the rate and first-class of products. Therefore, we can make sensible decisions to select which has the most realistic price.
On the other hand, shopping for matters on the Internet has some risks. Consumers cannot strive on things or take a look at the exception of goods in person, so they effectively run the hazard of bait-and-switch scams with the aid of buying things from low-status sellers. These low-quality merchandise would soon be dispensable, which make us go down the drain on our money.
In conclusion, I cannot deny the substantial benefits of purchasing things on the Internet that far outweigh the possible disadvantages. It is necessary to be aware of its drawbacks as well to prevent any risks associated with online purchases.
Transition Words or Phrases used:
first, firstly, look, moreover, second, so, therefore, well, in conclusion, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 6.0 13.1623246493 46% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 5.0 7.85571142285 64% => OK
Conjunction : 9.0 10.4138276553 86% => OK
Relative clauses : 5.0 7.30460921844 68% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 26.0 24.0651302605 108% => OK
Preposition: 48.0 41.998997996 114% => OK
Nominalization: 4.0 8.3376753507 48% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1463.0 1615.20841683 91% => OK
No of words: 286.0 315.596192385 91% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.11538461538 5.12529762239 100% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.11236361783 4.20363070211 98% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.90900055333 2.80592935109 104% => OK
Unique words: 168.0 176.041082164 95% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.587412587413 0.561755894193 105% => OK
syllable_count: 445.5 506.74238477 88% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 5.43587174349 92% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 6.0 4.76152304609 126% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 15.0 16.0721442886 93% => OK
Sentence length: 19.0 20.2975951904 94% => OK
Sentence length SD: 42.5625813754 49.4020404114 86% => OK
Chars per sentence: 97.5333333333 106.682146367 91% => OK
Words per sentence: 19.0666666667 20.7667163134 92% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.2 7.06120827912 88% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.38176352705 114% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 5.01903807615 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 8.67935871743 92% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 3.9879759519 25% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 6.0 3.4128256513 176% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.115457954311 0.244688304435 47% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0384790677777 0.084324248473 46% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0347345388056 0.0667982634062 52% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0654738703268 0.151304729494 43% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0295444862351 0.056905535591 52% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.2 13.0946893788 93% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 52.19 50.2224549098 104% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.7 11.3001002004 95% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.42 12.4159519038 100% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.89 8.58950901804 103% => OK
difficult_words: 78.0 78.4519038076 99% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 7.5 9.78957915832 77% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.6 10.1190380762 95% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 10.7795591182 93% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.