The first prison, who landed in moon in last century commented it as a big turn in human history, while some people belives that it won't make any change in daily life. In this essay I ll provide the reasons why I strongly disagrees with these arguments.
As mentioned early, it was a great step in human history to reach another planet; through which it opened a new window of possibilities to search about life in another planets and find out the nature of entertainment it posesses. This type of search can bring about changes in existing knowledge; for example, moon have favourable environment for human life according to recent evidence; which was a new piece of information obtained from the researches. Other planets has abundance of minerals and gases which are highly useful for many industries and research purpose. For example, extraterrestrial helium is utilised highly for different research purposes and industries.
secondly, many satelites are placed around the globe followed by human reach in moon; which are used for communication , defence and wet her forcast. T Vchannels and phones relays on satellites placed in moons orbits, as moon is the only one globe rotating around the world it will give opportunities for innovation exchange. For defence purpose satellite based radars are used, and accuracy of Wether prediction increased abruptly by the new advancement in space researches.
Overall the money spend for space researches won't be in vain, it will further improve human growth in enormous ways. In addition these researches can pamper human existence in earth by monitoring potential dangers from another planets.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
first, if, second, secondly, so, while, for example
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 9.0 13.1623246493 68% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 3.0 7.85571142285 38% => OK
Conjunction : 6.0 10.4138276553 58% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 6.0 7.30460921844 82% => OK
Pronoun: 14.0 24.0651302605 58% => OK
Preposition: 30.0 41.998997996 71% => OK
Nominalization: 11.0 8.3376753507 132% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1229.0 1615.20841683 76% => OK
No of words: 238.0 315.596192385 75% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.16386554622 5.12529762239 101% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.92775363542 4.20363070211 93% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.80553215301 2.80592935109 100% => OK
Unique words: 153.0 176.041082164 87% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.642857142857 0.561755894193 114% => OK
syllable_count: 396.0 506.74238477 78% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 5.43587174349 55% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 2.10420841683 143% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 4.76152304609 42% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 10.0 16.0721442886 62% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 23.0 20.2975951904 113% => OK
Sentence length SD: 48.2950308003 49.4020404114 98% => OK
Chars per sentence: 122.9 106.682146367 115% => OK
Words per sentence: 23.8 20.7667163134 115% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.1 7.06120827912 72% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 7.0 5.01903807615 139% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 8.67935871743 69% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.9879759519 50% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.4128256513 59% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.168337018434 0.244688304435 69% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0657684563657 0.084324248473 78% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0557379238854 0.0667982634062 83% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0966430372047 0.151304729494 64% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0420803459195 0.056905535591 74% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.8 13.0946893788 113% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 39.67 50.2224549098 79% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 13.4 11.3001002004 119% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.94 12.4159519038 104% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.69 8.58950901804 113% => OK
difficult_words: 74.0 78.4519038076 94% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 13.5 9.78957915832 138% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.2 10.1190380762 111% => OK
text_standard: 14.0 10.7795591182 130% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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More content wanted.
Minimum 250 words wanted.
Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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