1. Some people think that there should be some strict controls about noise. Other think that they could just make as much noise as they want. Discuss both of views and give your opinion.
Nowadays, it is clear that some people think that some essential measures should be applied to control noise. Meanwhile some individuals say that they can make noise as they like. I completely agree that it is better to reduce noise.
On the one hand, there are several reasons that people tend to make noise as they like. Firstly, some people feel more comfortable and free when creating noise from different activities and entertainment. For example, many of them have a trend that turning volume louder to enjoy their favorite songs which help them relaxed after a hectic day, although it can disturb their next-door neighbors. Moreover, someone think that noise is a part of industrialization and modernization process and it is unavoidable. The traffic noise or machine noise become familiar with urban citizens. While they feel do not have any exactly reasons to controls noise.
On the other hand, I think that there are various benefits if government impose some laws to strictly control noise. Firstly, noise has a harmful impact on people’s health. For example, I cannot go to bed in the night because of intrusive sounds. It has a huge impact on my quality work. I am not able to attention to my project and my health become bad. Meanwhile, the productivity of work may be reduced as a consequence of noise. A lot of white-collar workers feedback that they cannot fully attention to their work because of the constant noise from vehicles on the street or machine noise.
In conclusion, I agree that people can make the noise if they want. But it should be limited in order to have a better life.
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 111, Rule ID: SENT_START_CONJUNCTIVE_LINKING_ADVERB_COMMA[1]
Message: Did you forget a comma after a conjunctive/linking adverb?
Suggestion: Meanwhile,
...res should be applied to control noise. Meanwhile some individuals say that they can make...
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Line 2, column 414, Rule ID: HE_VERB_AGR[1]
Message: The pronoun 'someone' must be used with a third-person verb: 'thinks'.
Suggestion: thinks
... next-door neighbors. Moreover, someone think that noise is a part of industrializati...
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Line 2, column 583, Rule ID: SENTENCE_FRAGMENT[1]
Message: “While” at the beginning of a sentence requires a 2nd clause. Maybe a comma, question or exclamation mark is missing, or the sentence is incomplete and should be joined with the following sentence.
...se become familiar with urban citizens. While they feel do not have any exactly reaso...
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Line 2, column 634, Rule ID: TO_NON_BASE[1]
Message: The verb after "to" should be in the base form: 'control'.
Suggestion: control
...feel do not have any exactly reasons to controls noise. On the other hand, I think that...
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Line 3, column 460, Rule ID: POSSESIVE_APOSTROPHE[1]
Message: Possible typo: apostrophe is missing. Did you mean 'workers'' or 'worker's'?
Suggestion: workers'; worker's
...equence of noise. A lot of white-collar workers feedback that they cannot fully attenti...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, first, firstly, if, may, moreover, so, while, for example, i think, in conclusion, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 9.0 13.1623246493 68% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 8.0 7.85571142285 102% => OK
Conjunction : 8.0 10.4138276553 77% => OK
Relative clauses : 12.0 7.30460921844 164% => OK
Pronoun: 35.0 24.0651302605 145% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 32.0 41.998997996 76% => OK
Nominalization: 7.0 8.3376753507 84% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1341.0 1615.20841683 83% => OK
No of words: 276.0 315.596192385 87% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.85869565217 5.12529762239 95% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.07593519647 4.20363070211 97% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.71535914352 2.80592935109 97% => OK
Unique words: 148.0 176.041082164 84% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.536231884058 0.561755894193 95% => OK
syllable_count: 423.9 506.74238477 84% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 7.0 5.43587174349 129% => OK
Interrogative: 0.0 0.384769539078 0% => OK
Article: 3.0 2.52805611222 119% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 4.76152304609 63% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 18.0 16.0721442886 112% => OK
Sentence length: 15.0 20.2975951904 74% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 38.1213543086 49.4020404114 77% => OK
Chars per sentence: 74.5 106.682146367 70% => OK
Words per sentence: 15.3333333333 20.7667163134 74% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.83333333333 7.06120827912 83% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 5.0 5.01903807615 100% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 10.0 8.67935871743 115% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 3.9879759519 25% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 7.0 3.4128256513 205% => Less facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.372697545941 0.244688304435 152% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.112850846179 0.084324248473 134% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.101653099762 0.0667982634062 152% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.254889496122 0.151304729494 168% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0948689303534 0.056905535591 167% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 9.1 13.0946893788 69% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 64.71 50.2224549098 129% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 8.0 11.3001002004 71% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.32 12.4159519038 83% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.7 8.58950901804 90% => OK
difficult_words: 58.0 78.4519038076 74% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 9.78957915832 82% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.0 10.1190380762 79% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 10.7795591182 74% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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