5. Many people go to university for academic study. More people should be encouraged to do vocational training because there is a lack of qualified workers such as electricians or plumbers. To what extent do you agree or disagree?
Nowadays, an increasing number people are concerned about students who graduated high school should do vocational training more go to higher education such as university or college, the simple reason that there is a shortage of consummate workers as electricians or plumbers at the moment. This essay will give an insight into the opinion.
One the one hand, due to the booming of technology, someone thinks that the pupils graduated high school needs to go to university or college for academic study. The reason that after graduated higher education, they will become higher workers like energies or architects. This thing has meant that they will help development their country. Moreover, excellent students can have scholarly and they go to oversea. After that, they come back their country and make it to development country. Meanwhile, students do not like become a electricians or plumbers because they are blue-collar workers who are not officers and they must be face to dangerous in their work.
On the other hand, in some underdevelopment areas, the local people do not have enough money for children go to higher education. This is the reason why people in this area who has a trend that does vocational training. Firstly, people in poor areas do not have financial and the tuition in university or college is higher more training school and they might be having a chance to change their life. Secondly, there is a lack of qualified workers such as electricians and plumbers and they never face to unemployment after they graduated. They might be having a job after graduation.
In conclusion, I do not completely that people should be encouraged to go to training school to become workers such as electricians or plumbers because students can choose their life and social must respect their decided.
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 2, column 529, Rule ID: EN_A_VS_AN
Message: Use 'an' instead of 'a' if the following word starts with a vowel sound, e.g. 'an article', 'an hour'
Suggestion: an
... Meanwhile, students do not like become a electricians or plumbers because they a...
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Line 2, column 529, Rule ID: A_PLURAL[1]
Message: Don't use indefinite articles with plural words. Did you mean 'a electrician' or simply 'electricians'?
Suggestion: a electrician; electricians
... Meanwhile, students do not like become a electricians or plumbers because they are blue-colla...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
first, firstly, if, moreover, second, secondly, so, while, in conclusion, such as, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 11.0 13.1623246493 84% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 11.0 7.85571142285 140% => OK
Conjunction : 15.0 10.4138276553 144% => OK
Relative clauses : 10.0 7.30460921844 137% => OK
Pronoun: 29.0 24.0651302605 121% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 32.0 41.998997996 76% => OK
Nominalization: 9.0 8.3376753507 108% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1519.0 1615.20841683 94% => OK
No of words: 299.0 315.596192385 95% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.08026755853 5.12529762239 99% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.1583189471 4.20363070211 99% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.77539584854 2.80592935109 99% => OK
Unique words: 142.0 176.041082164 81% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.47491638796 0.561755894193 85% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 469.8 506.74238477 93% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 7.0 5.43587174349 129% => OK
Interrogative: 0.0 0.384769539078 0% => OK
Article: 4.0 2.52805611222 158% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.76152304609 84% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 14.0 16.0721442886 87% => OK
Sentence length: 21.0 20.2975951904 103% => OK
Sentence length SD: 68.243710931 49.4020404114 138% => OK
Chars per sentence: 108.5 106.682146367 102% => OK
Words per sentence: 21.3571428571 20.7667163134 103% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.14285714286 7.06120827912 101% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 5.01903807615 40% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 8.67935871743 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 3.9879759519 75% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 3.4128256513 117% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.305176902022 0.244688304435 125% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.100624397042 0.084324248473 119% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0909636748968 0.0667982634062 136% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.217307736799 0.151304729494 144% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0641676884426 0.056905535591 113% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.2 13.0946893788 101% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 50.16 50.2224549098 100% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.5 11.3001002004 102% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.18 12.4159519038 98% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.79 8.58950901804 91% => OK
difficult_words: 59.0 78.4519038076 75% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 14.5 9.78957915832 148% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.4 10.1190380762 103% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.7795591182 111% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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