Accommodation and transport problems are increasing in many large cities. Businesses are encouraged to move to rural areas. Do advantages outweigh disadvantages
One of the most challenging problems big cities have to deal with for many years is overpopulation leading to accommodation and transport issues, which exerts a negative impact on people’s life. Therefore, it has been suggested that businesses should move to rural areas with the aim of decreasing the population in cities and creating a better environment for urban citizens. However, in my perspectives, I strongly disagree with this opinion as the disadvantages can outweigh advantages.
First and foremost, the movement of businesses from cities to the countryside is unlikely to address the problem of accommodation and transportation. Initially, the number of permanent city citizens is always much higher than that of rural areas, which makes it impossible to improve the situation. Moreover, people moving and staying in a big city with the aim of seeking more opportunities in their life, even when businesses move to rural areas, city is still the only place that can meet all their requirements as city is always a cultural, political and economic hub of the country, attracting billions of investment each year. As a result, the population in big city stay unchanged, or even increase significantly.
In addition to that, in all likelihood, this policy can negatively affect business operations and even result in an economic crisis. Initially, in view of companies moving to the countryside, they definitely have to face to up a lot of challenges leading to a sharp fall in profit. Not only do they need to bear the burden of expensive cost of logistic and supply chain but they also have to deal with fierce local competition as well as local culture and language barriers. Furthermore, in urban areas, with an enormous number of populations and a serious lack of services, individuals’ life will also be negatively affected. Besides, businesses moving away also cause a significant loss of jobs and break the chain of businesses in cities. These problems both in rural and urban zone make it possible for an economic crisis to happen.
Last but not least, businesses movement will exert a profound impact on the sustainable development of big cities. It is much more challenging for cities and the whole country attract more foreign investments as well as globally cooperate as cities are no longer the heart of economic development.
To conclude, in my perspective, I strongly argue that companies have to move to rural areas in order to solve the problem of accommodation and transport because these movements result in more negative rather than positive influences.
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Suggestion:
...gative rather than positive influences.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, besides, but, first, furthermore, however, if, moreover, so, still, therefore, well, in addition, as a result, as well as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 9.0 13.1623246493 68% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 7.0 7.85571142285 89% => OK
Conjunction : 17.0 10.4138276553 163% => OK
Relative clauses : 8.0 7.30460921844 110% => OK
Pronoun: 22.0 24.0651302605 91% => OK
Preposition: 64.0 41.998997996 152% => OK
Nominalization: 16.0 8.3376753507 192% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2178.0 1615.20841683 135% => OK
No of words: 420.0 315.596192385 133% => OK
Chars per words: 5.18571428571 5.12529762239 101% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.52701905584 4.20363070211 108% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.06836687563 2.80592935109 109% => OK
Unique words: 215.0 176.041082164 122% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.511904761905 0.561755894193 91% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 703.8 506.74238477 139% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 7.0 5.43587174349 129% => OK
Article: 3.0 2.52805611222 119% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 8.0 4.76152304609 168% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 16.0 16.0721442886 100% => OK
Sentence length: 26.0 20.2975951904 128% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 59.1407220111 49.4020404114 120% => OK
Chars per sentence: 136.125 106.682146367 128% => OK
Words per sentence: 26.25 20.7667163134 126% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.9375 7.06120827912 112% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.38176352705 114% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.01903807615 20% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 8.67935871743 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 8.0 3.9879759519 201% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.292918729122 0.244688304435 120% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0889495470433 0.084324248473 105% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0568984755171 0.0667982634062 85% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.160920703291 0.151304729494 106% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0687228938269 0.056905535591 121% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 16.1 13.0946893788 123% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 36.63 50.2224549098 73% => OK
smog_index: 11.2 7.44779559118 150% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 14.6 11.3001002004 129% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.12 12.4159519038 106% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.99 8.58950901804 105% => OK
difficult_words: 108.0 78.4519038076 138% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 16.0 9.78957915832 163% => OK
gunning_fog: 12.4 10.1190380762 123% => OK
text_standard: 16.0 10.7795591182 148% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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