Advantages and disadvantages of love marriage and arranged marriage

Essay topics:

Advantages and disadvantages of love marriage and arranged marriage .

Marriage is a turning point which comes in every body life . For marriage almost everybody has to choose between love marriage and arranged . Now with the passage of time both modes of marriage are equally popular among people . Both modes of marriage have their own merits and demerits .
Love marriage is advantageous because in this the couple have time to know and understand each other . They can learn in advance if they can spend their whole life peacefully with their would be spouse or not . Parents do not have to worry about finding the suitable match for their children nor about the happy married life . Since love marriage is done with full consent of the couple , parents do not have to spend much to appease the realtives and there is not any kind of extravagance . Hence love marriage is emperical and economic as well . But most of time love marriage is an intercaste marriage , inter-religious marriage or inter-racial marriage which is a taboo in orthodox societies . Most of the couples are ostracised or rejected by their own orthodox parents . In some societies , sometimes lovers have to elope or to avoid honour killing , they have to get married in the courts followed by police protection

Arranged marriage has its own advantage and disadvantages . It is more acceptable in the society as compared to love marriage . Even in the twenty first century arranged marriage is preferable in orthodox societies because it is done with the constent of two families . It helps encouraging new relations among families of families . But sometimes couples are forced under parental pressure to do arranged marriage . Arranged marriage is like hide and seek . They couple do not have time to know and understand each other . Such couples feel frustrated after the marriage . Usually they do not get on well with each other . Sometimes such marriages end in divorce .
Hence love and arranged marriage have their own positive and negative views . People should choose their mode of marriage as per their requirements and family background

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Average: 7.8 (2 votes)

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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, first, hence, if, so, well, kind of

Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments

Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 13.0 13.1623246493 99% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 4.0 7.85571142285 51% => OK
Conjunction : 16.0 10.4138276553 154% => OK
Relative clauses : 1.0 7.30460921844 14% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 17.0 24.0651302605 71% => OK
Preposition: 40.0 41.998997996 95% => OK
Nominalization: 3.0 8.3376753507 36% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.

Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1457.0 1615.20841683 90% => OK
No of words: 288.0 315.596192385 91% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.05902777778 5.12529762239 99% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.11953428781 4.20363070211 98% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.73855637846 2.80592935109 98% => OK
Unique words: 143.0 176.041082164 81% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.496527777778 0.561755894193 88% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 474.3 506.74238477 94% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK

A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 5.43587174349 92% => OK
Article: 0.0 2.52805611222 0% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 2.0 0.809619238477 247% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 2.0 4.76152304609 42% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.

Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 18.0 16.0721442886 112% => OK
Sentence length: 16.0 20.2975951904 79% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 45.6323539651 49.4020404114 92% => OK
Chars per sentence: 80.9444444444 106.682146367 76% => OK
Words per sentence: 16.0 20.7667163134 77% => OK
Discourse Markers: 2.22222222222 7.06120827912 31% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 3.0 4.38176352705 68% => More paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 31.0 5.01903807615 618% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 8.67935871743 92% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 6.0 3.9879759519 150% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 3.4128256513 117% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?

Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.425803473795 0.244688304435 174% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.156932185686 0.084324248473 186% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.115330204356 0.0667982634062 173% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.317577592059 0.151304729494 210% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0454738106683 0.056905535591 80% => OK

Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 10.4 13.0946893788 79% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 55.24 50.2224549098 110% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.5 11.3001002004 84% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.77 12.4159519038 95% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.5 8.58950901804 87% => OK
difficult_words: 56.0 78.4519038076 71% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 9.78957915832 112% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.4 10.1190380762 83% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 10.7795591182 93% => OK
What are above readability scores?

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Minimum four paragraphs wanted.

Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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