Today, most people use mobile phones in every routine works. This essay will take at advantages of mobile phones can have and also the drawbacks. however, the advantages seem to out weigh the drawbacks.
The first advantage is people could talk to each other in any place. For example, when number of families go to another city or even country, they can talk with them or even see them. On the other hand, they could connect or link with other foreign people and learn about other cultures or histories.
The second reason, today there are a lot of applications that people can use them for everything. For example, they can shopping or order food with mobile phones. They can take a taxi or buy plant or train tickets.
The third reason, they know about news online. If occur wars, accident or earthquakes on another side of the earth, they can know in some minutes.
However, mobile phones have some disadvantages such as children play mobile games and don’t do exercise and it is bad for their health. When mobile phones use in daily lives, some people try to use this for bad things such still money. They find your password bank account and still your money.
Overall, today mobile phones are important things in daily lives and most people use mobile phones in daily lives. This issue has advantages and drawbacks too. However, advantages seem to more than disadvantages.
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 147, Rule ID: UPPERCASE_SENTENCE_START
Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: However
...phones can have and also the drawbacks. however, the advantages seem to out weigh the d...
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Line 3, column 120, Rule ID: DID_BASEFORM[1]
Message: The verb 'can' requires the base form of the verb: 'shop'
Suggestion: shop
...m for everything. For example, they can shopping or order food with mobile phones. They ...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, first, however, if, second, so, still, third, for example, such as, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 4.0 13.1623246493 30% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 9.0 7.85571142285 115% => OK
Conjunction : 15.0 10.4138276553 144% => OK
Relative clauses : 3.0 7.30460921844 41% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 18.0 24.0651302605 75% => OK
Preposition: 24.0 41.998997996 57% => More preposition wanted.
Nominalization: 0.0 8.3376753507 0% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1147.0 1615.20841683 71% => OK
No of words: 239.0 315.596192385 76% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.79916317992 5.12529762239 94% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.93187294222 4.20363070211 94% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.28687787223 2.80592935109 82% => OK
Unique words: 129.0 176.041082164 73% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.539748953975 0.561755894193 96% => OK
syllable_count: 357.3 506.74238477 71% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 9.0 5.43587174349 166% => OK
Article: 4.0 2.52805611222 158% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 2.10420841683 143% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 1.0 4.76152304609 21% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 17.0 16.0721442886 106% => OK
Sentence length: 14.0 20.2975951904 69% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 28.5130941813 49.4020404114 58% => The essay contains lots of sentences with the similar length. More sentence varieties wanted.
Chars per sentence: 67.4705882353 106.682146367 63% => OK
Words per sentence: 14.0588235294 20.7667163134 68% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.35294117647 7.06120827912 76% => OK
Paragraphs: 6.0 4.38176352705 137% => Less paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 2.0 5.01903807615 40% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 8.67935871743 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 3.9879759519 100% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 6.0 3.4128256513 176% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.280755573568 0.244688304435 115% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0892686842516 0.084324248473 106% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.107436633129 0.0667982634062 161% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.1536662879 0.151304729494 102% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.151428681259 0.056905535591 266% => More connections among paragraphs wanted.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 8.2 13.0946893788 63% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 65.73 50.2224549098 131% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 7.6 11.3001002004 67% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 9.97 12.4159519038 80% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 6.71 8.58950901804 78% => OK
difficult_words: 36.0 78.4519038076 46% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 6.5 9.78957915832 66% => OK
gunning_fog: 7.6 10.1190380762 75% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 10.7795591182 74% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Maximum five paragraphs wanted.
Minimum 250 words wanted.
Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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