Last decades witnessed a jump in techno logical advancement all over the world. There are a lot of positive and negative influences of this in community. From my point of view it can contribute a huge number of goodness when compared to the bad. In this essay we can discuss the both side of the topic.
people should run behind the growing world, otherwise it will difficult to cope up with the changes; this feature motivates them to accept modern technology. There are thousands of discoveries which will help the human in day to day life. It will enable him to meet the requirements some more easily. use of machines reduced both the effort and time dramatically. Autmobile industry run so far in recent years resulted in comfortable transportation and saves time. Plethora of inventions in domestic equipments supported house wives enormously. Telephone communication and mobile phones boosted exchange of information quickly and precisely. Computers and Televisions escalated the education sector in many ways.
On the other hand there are abundance of hazards or bad effects accounted by technology. People become sedentary and lazy when compared to the past. carbon dioxide and other green house gases polluted the atmosphere up to an extent, even ozone layer got damaged by this. Nuclear power plants gives us huge amount of energy, while disposal of the waste products of this become a serious issue. Radiation hazards increased due to use of various kind of waves for different purposes. Factors as well as industrial areas damaged the nature vigorously. Information systems are misused by so many people and even children widely. Children often addicted to social media become reluctant to study and other activities.
in a nutshell, technologies should be used wisely and precisely to avoid potential harm effects. Even though it can bring best to the humanity, misuse can end up with disaster.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, if, so, well, while, kind of, as well as, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 5.0 13.1623246493 38% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 9.0 7.85571142285 115% => OK
Conjunction : 12.0 10.4138276553 115% => OK
Relative clauses : 3.0 7.30460921844 41% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 14.0 24.0651302605 58% => OK
Preposition: 49.0 41.998997996 117% => OK
Nominalization: 8.0 8.3376753507 96% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1601.0 1615.20841683 99% => OK
No of words: 310.0 315.596192385 98% => OK
Chars per words: 5.16451612903 5.12529762239 101% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.19604776685 4.20363070211 100% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.7896512338 2.80592935109 99% => OK
Unique words: 202.0 176.041082164 115% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.651612903226 0.561755894193 116% => OK
syllable_count: 527.4 506.74238477 104% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 2.0 5.43587174349 37% => OK
Article: 0.0 2.52805611222 0% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.76152304609 84% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 22.0 16.0721442886 137% => OK
Sentence length: 14.0 20.2975951904 69% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 23.4762496477 49.4020404114 48% => The essay contains lots of sentences with the similar length. More sentence varieties wanted.
Chars per sentence: 72.7727272727 106.682146367 68% => OK
Words per sentence: 14.0909090909 20.7667163134 68% => OK
Discourse Markers: 2.90909090909 7.06120827912 41% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 13.0 5.01903807615 259% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 10.0 8.67935871743 115% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 7.0 3.9879759519 176% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 5.0 3.4128256513 147% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.0173549876043 0.244688304435 7% => The similarity between the topic and the content is low.
Sentence topic coherence: 0.00448437341451 0.084324248473 5% => Sentence topic similarity is low.
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0205499806164 0.0667982634062 31% => Sentences are similar to each other.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.016149155749 0.151304729494 11% => Maybe some paragraphs are off the topic.
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0279711582566 0.056905535591 49% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 9.9 13.0946893788 76% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 48.81 50.2224549098 97% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.9 11.3001002004 88% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.06 12.4159519038 97% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.83 8.58950901804 114% => OK
difficult_words: 108.0 78.4519038076 138% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 7.0 9.78957915832 72% => OK
gunning_fog: 7.6 10.1190380762 75% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 10.7795591182 93% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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It is not exactly right on the topic in the view of e-grader. Maybe there is a wrong essay topic.
Rates: 11.2359550562 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 1.0 Out of 9
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