Advertisements bring many negative effects on people and the society. What are these effects? How to solve this problem?
It is true that advertising is deemed to be a key part of modern business, and it is a form of state-of-the-art promotion campaign in every commercial company. Although advertisements can give rise to some adverse effects on both individuals and the society; however, I hold a conviction that the society can take steps to mitigate these potential problems.
There are some negative effects that advertisements give rise to customers. Firstly, commercials may arouse customers desire to purchase merchandises regardless of whether they actually need them or not. To be precise, some commercial break with catchy jingles or snappy slogans make people intrigued and feel inadequate if they do not have this product. For example, children are often the target market because they are particularly susceptible to these kinds of risk. As a result, this put pressure on parents to buy them things. Moreover, too many advertisements cause confusion on their own decisions. In many cases, advertising companies manipulate people by overstating or even misrepresent their products. Gradually, they feel deeply cynical and skeptical about every product in the market, resulting misconception about good products.
There are several actions that the government could take to solve the problems described above. Firstly, the administration should impose stringent laws on advertisements broadcasted on the TV or social media. For example, unhealthy foods or cigarettes, which are detrimental to the society in general and viewers in particular, can be censored or even banned. In addition, social organizations should provide free lessons about basic life skills, including buying skills can raise public perception of advertising industry so that the locals can more sensible and become wise customers. By doing this, customers can deter themselves from squandering on bad commodities.
In conclusion, various measures can be taken to tackle the problems arising from the advertising industry.
Transition Words or Phrases used:
actually, first, firstly, however, if, may, moreover, so, for example, in addition, in conclusion, in general, in particular, as a result, in many cases, it is true
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 12.0 13.1623246493 91% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 12.0 7.85571142285 153% => OK
Conjunction : 12.0 10.4138276553 115% => OK
Relative clauses : 6.0 7.30460921844 82% => OK
Pronoun: 22.0 24.0651302605 91% => OK
Preposition: 39.0 41.998997996 93% => OK
Nominalization: 7.0 8.3376753507 84% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1697.0 1615.20841683 105% => OK
No of words: 301.0 315.596192385 95% => OK
Chars per words: 5.63787375415 5.12529762239 110% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.16525528304 4.20363070211 99% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.14405798387 2.80592935109 112% => OK
Unique words: 192.0 176.041082164 109% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.637873754153 0.561755894193 114% => OK
syllable_count: 526.5 506.74238477 104% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 5.43587174349 74% => OK
Interrogative: 0.0 0.384769539078 0% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 4.76152304609 105% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 16.0 16.0721442886 100% => OK
Sentence length: 18.0 20.2975951904 89% => OK
Sentence length SD: 43.8356304848 49.4020404114 89% => OK
Chars per sentence: 106.0625 106.682146367 99% => OK
Words per sentence: 18.8125 20.7667163134 91% => OK
Discourse Markers: 10.25 7.06120827912 145% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 5.01903807615 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 3.0 8.67935871743 35% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 12.0 3.9879759519 301% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.218541504721 0.244688304435 89% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0665289381011 0.084324248473 79% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.061923655449 0.0667982634062 93% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.115539225396 0.151304729494 76% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0422139085735 0.056905535591 74% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.5 13.0946893788 111% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 44.75 50.2224549098 89% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.5 11.3001002004 102% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 15.43 12.4159519038 124% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.83 8.58950901804 114% => OK
difficult_words: 101.0 78.4519038076 129% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 9.78957915832 112% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.2 10.1190380762 91% => OK
text_standard: 15.0 10.7795591182 139% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 84.2696629213 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.5 Out of 9
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