Air traffic is increasingly leading to more noise, pollution and airport constuction. One reason for this is the growth low-cost passenger flights, often to holiday destinations.
Some people say that the government should try to reduce air traffic by taxing it more heavily.
Do you agree or disagree?
The low rate of air tickets have increased the influx of travellers to holiday destinations, thereby resulting in environmental pollution and danger to the ecosystem. Due to these adverse effects, a number of people have suggested that the government should make travelling by air less attractive through heavy taxation. While the effect of this appear dangerous, I think it is unnecessary to place heavy tax on it because it would not take the queue off the airports and it will have adverse effect on the operation of airlines.
To begin with, there are numerous reasons why the government should jettison the idea of heavily taxing commuters, more prominent is the fact that it would not take off the long queues of the airport. The quest to always relax and move away from the daily routine of business makes people seek leisure in some new locations no matter what it would cost, moreover holidays are always memorable and worth any cost. For example, my neighbours are always interested in visiting holiday resorts in Miami, Dubai and other pleasurable destinations even if they have to pay double of the amount. Furthermore, business activity always put people on the move, and the demands of work are not one to wave easily as a result of this, the airports are always overcrowded. This is one of the reasons why the Murtala Mohammed International is considered the busiest in Africa.
On the other hand, while the incessant congestion and busy airways are dangerous to the environment, over taxing would create difficulty in airline operations because they will be in a competition to woo more clients and this will lead to animosity and unhealthy relationships between them. To illustrate this, the courts have received numerous applications of trade disputes between various airlines in the Nnamdi Azikiwe International Airport due to price fluctuations and meeting the unions demand. Hence, I am of the opinion that it is not advisable to place uneasy burden of taxes on air operations.
Conclusively, there is increasing danger posed to health and wellbeing due to over population in use of flights and high quest for vacation travels, thus prompting the recommendation for high tax regime. I disagree with this view due to the aforementioned reasons canvassed.
Transition Words or Phrases used:
furthermore, hence, if, moreover, so, thus, well, while, for example, i think, as a result, to begin with, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 13.0 13.1623246493 99% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 9.0 7.85571142285 115% => OK
Conjunction : 12.0 10.4138276553 115% => OK
Relative clauses : 3.0 7.30460921844 41% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 24.0 24.0651302605 100% => OK
Preposition: 58.0 41.998997996 138% => OK
Nominalization: 11.0 8.3376753507 132% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1910.0 1615.20841683 118% => OK
No of words: 374.0 315.596192385 119% => OK
Chars per words: 5.10695187166 5.12529762239 100% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.3976220399 4.20363070211 105% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.8873241981 2.80592935109 103% => OK
Unique words: 209.0 176.041082164 119% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.558823529412 0.561755894193 99% => OK
syllable_count: 613.8 506.74238477 121% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 5.43587174349 92% => OK
Article: 5.0 2.52805611222 198% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.76152304609 84% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 16.0721442886 81% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 28.0 20.2975951904 138% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 55.8144644144 49.4020404114 113% => OK
Chars per sentence: 146.923076923 106.682146367 138% => OK
Words per sentence: 28.7692307692 20.7667163134 139% => OK
Discourse Markers: 9.53846153846 7.06120827912 135% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 5.01903807615 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 5.0 8.67935871743 58% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 7.0 3.9879759519 176% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.261608206462 0.244688304435 107% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0850966329136 0.084324248473 101% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0292446057328 0.0667982634062 44% => Sentences are similar to each other.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.139489870743 0.151304729494 92% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0353541573753 0.056905535591 62% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 17.0 13.0946893788 130% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 43.06 50.2224549098 86% => OK
smog_index: 11.2 7.44779559118 150% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 14.2 11.3001002004 126% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.95 12.4159519038 104% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.33 8.58950901804 109% => OK
difficult_words: 102.0 78.4519038076 130% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 14.0 9.78957915832 143% => OK
gunning_fog: 13.2 10.1190380762 130% => OK
text_standard: 14.0 10.7795591182 130% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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