Although more and more people read news on the internet, newspapers will remain the most important source of news. Do you agree or disagree?
It is well known that, technology has brought drastic change in human life. Even though, many people read news through internet, newspapers will remain the most preferred source of news. I partially agree to this statement and I will explain my reasons in the following passage.
On the one hand, newspapers give us the current information about what is happening in today’s world. At the same time, it provides data about only the current day. Many people were habitant to read news only in newspapers. For example, old generation people prefer to read newspapers as they are habituated to it and they are unaware of modern methods by which they can gain more information too. However, during olden days before the emerge of internet people were habituated to read newspaper one cannot change their habits suddenly. Even, there are health benefits because of newspaper as reading it would not cause any eye strain.
On the other hand, internet is playing a wide role in everyone’s life. Mostly, young stars always spend their time in internet by browsing to different aspects. Consequently, they can know even about the past with the help different online websites. Indirectly, by using internet as source of information one can reduce the waste of paper and it also save so much time. For example, individuals can acquire the knowledge according to their requirement even by sitting at their workplace or even during travel time.
After having considered all the above discussed points, we can finally draw a conclusion that newspapers will have its own importance, but usage of newspapers has gradually decreased as technology has developed other many sources to grasp knowledge and information.
Grammar and spelling errors:
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, consequently, finally, however, if, so, well, for example, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 8.0 13.1623246493 61% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 10.0 7.85571142285 127% => OK
Conjunction : 6.0 10.4138276553 58% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 3.0 7.30460921844 41% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 22.0 24.0651302605 91% => OK
Preposition: 40.0 41.998997996 95% => OK
Nominalization: 8.0 8.3376753507 96% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1438.0 1615.20841683 89% => OK
No of words: 278.0 315.596192385 88% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.1726618705 5.12529762239 101% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.08329915638 4.20363070211 97% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.67839514036 2.80592935109 95% => OK
Unique words: 171.0 176.041082164 97% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.615107913669 0.561755894193 109% => OK
syllable_count: 452.7 506.74238477 89% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 5.43587174349 92% => OK
Article: 0.0 2.52805611222 0% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 6.0 4.76152304609 126% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 15.0 16.0721442886 93% => OK
Sentence length: 18.0 20.2975951904 89% => OK
Sentence length SD: 51.0485607589 49.4020404114 103% => OK
Chars per sentence: 95.8666666667 106.682146367 90% => OK
Words per sentence: 18.5333333333 20.7667163134 89% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.8 7.06120827912 82% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 4.0 5.01903807615 80% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 8.67935871743 104% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 3.9879759519 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 6.0 3.4128256513 176% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.265824718036 0.244688304435 109% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0837297950643 0.084324248473 99% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.11127360608 0.0667982634062 167% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.161330183845 0.151304729494 107% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.109836221502 0.056905535591 193% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.2 13.0946893788 93% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 53.21 50.2224549098 106% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.3 11.3001002004 91% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.71 12.4159519038 102% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.16 8.58950901804 95% => OK
difficult_words: 64.0 78.4519038076 82% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 6.5 9.78957915832 66% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.2 10.1190380762 91% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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