The twenty first century has witnessed with a remarkable increase in obesity Among children.the time should surge in schools which is for physical activities in order to curb the fat problems among children. It is better however there are several other solutions which helps to tackle this situation. I shall explain about this problem and solutions in upcoming paragraphs.
It is noteworthy to mention that children are suffering with obese problem which can be attributed to the unhealthy eating habits along with they spend their most of time to play indoor games. If they spend large amount of time to playing games during their school, it has negative impact on their study due to reduction of their study time. Hence, it is good way but not a only solution to tackle the obese problem with children who suffer with that in their early age.
To tackle this problem, there are several things which helps to solve this problem. Such as awareness programs which can helps to children what are the health hazardous of obese in beginning ages and also they can achieve some advices related to health from their teachers. Advices for example, teachers should tell them about balanced diet which contains several nutrients and vitamins which helps them to stay healthy. Children can play some outdoor games after their school such as football which gain their body ability and child stay away their tension and worries during games.
In conclusion, after analysing what other things are available for children which can help them to fit and also reduce their body fat. I personally feel that, time increase in schools for sports and exercise is not a one solution of obese problem however, there are various solutions which helps to decrease fat like children should spend some time in gymnasium and do some excercise which can decline their weight.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, hence, however, if, so, for example, in conclusion, such as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 12.0 13.1623246493 91% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 10.0 7.85571142285 127% => OK
Conjunction : 9.0 10.4138276553 86% => OK
Relative clauses : 15.0 7.30460921844 205% => Less relative clauses wanted (maybe 'which' is over used).
Pronoun: 30.0 24.0651302605 125% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 45.0 41.998997996 107% => OK
Nominalization: 5.0 8.3376753507 60% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1542.0 1615.20841683 95% => OK
No of words: 309.0 315.596192385 98% => OK
Chars per words: 4.99029126214 5.12529762239 97% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.1926597562 4.20363070211 100% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.28456043663 2.80592935109 81% => OK
Unique words: 159.0 176.041082164 90% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.514563106796 0.561755894193 92% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 466.2 506.74238477 92% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 5.43587174349 110% => OK
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 4.76152304609 63% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 12.0 16.0721442886 75% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 25.0 20.2975951904 123% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 56.4094037669 49.4020404114 114% => OK
Chars per sentence: 128.5 106.682146367 120% => OK
Words per sentence: 25.75 20.7667163134 124% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.41666666667 7.06120827912 91% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 5.0 5.01903807615 100% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 8.67935871743 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 5.0 3.9879759519 125% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 3.4128256513 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.312046628718 0.244688304435 128% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.137511236464 0.084324248473 163% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0714002480996 0.0667982634062 107% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.217965144057 0.151304729494 144% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0549674093304 0.056905535591 97% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.9 13.0946893788 114% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 54.56 50.2224549098 109% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.9 11.3001002004 105% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.96 12.4159519038 96% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.3 8.58950901804 97% => OK
difficult_words: 67.0 78.4519038076 85% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 9.78957915832 112% => OK
gunning_fog: 12.0 10.1190380762 119% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.7795591182 111% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 67.4157303371 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.0 Out of 9
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