Attending a live performance (for example, a play, concert, or sporting event) is more enjoyable than watching the same event on television. To what extent do you agree or disagree?(reup)
Due to the advancement of technology as well as the huge demand for different sorts of entertainment, there is such a wide range of shows and programs offered through mass media. As a couch potato, rather than attending a live performance, staying at home and binge-watching it on TV is my go-to option since it is not only convenient but also economical.In these days and ages, especially during coronavirus outbreak, these ideas make sense than ever, along with simplify decision making.
In the 4.0 era, there is no need for audiences to travel such a long distance to see events in their presence.People are able to watch them from the beginning till the end in the conveniences of their own house. It’s advantageous that they don’t encounter any problems such as traffic congestion, being late or being infected while COVID19 is wide-spreading. Therefore, they could have light mood to enjoy it fully without worries. Besides, there is no limitation at all, comparing to live ones which have some particular rules to obey.For instance, during a play, under no circumstances could people get a drink or do the other stuffs.In contrast, audiences have freedom to do whatever they want while watching it through TV’s screen from home.
On top of that, it’s undeniable that a live performance costs an arm and leg and seeing the broadcasted one is such a good way to save money.Despite the fact that people would sooner observe their idol in real life, it will be irritating moment if the performance falls short of their expectation due to many aspects such as position, quality.Meanwhile, just with 64 inch screen, staying at home, they could feel the atmosphere, the vibe and watch it with the best points of view free of charge.
To sum up, it is evident that observing broadcasted shows is obviously superior to attending the live one because of its convenience and the less money consumption.I do hope there will be more entertaining shows and performances for everyone to see while there are not so much things to do but watching TV and quarantine.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, besides, but, if, so, therefore, well, while, for instance, in contrast, such as, as well as, to sum up, on top of that
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 15.0 13.1623246493 114% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 7.0 7.85571142285 89% => OK
Conjunction : 13.0 10.4138276553 125% => OK
Relative clauses : 6.0 7.30460921844 82% => OK
Pronoun: 28.0 24.0651302605 116% => OK
Preposition: 49.0 41.998997996 117% => OK
Nominalization: 14.0 8.3376753507 168% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1719.0 1615.20841683 106% => OK
No of words: 349.0 315.596192385 111% => OK
Chars per words: 4.92550143266 5.12529762239 96% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.32221490584 4.20363070211 103% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.99046522172 2.80592935109 107% => OK
Unique words: 213.0 176.041082164 121% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.610315186246 0.561755894193 109% => OK
syllable_count: 523.8 506.74238477 103% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 8.0 5.43587174349 147% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 9.0 4.76152304609 189% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 8.0 16.0721442886 50% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 43.0 20.2975951904 212% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 123.50550342 49.4020404114 250% => The lengths of sentences changed so frequently.
Chars per sentence: 214.875 106.682146367 201% => Less chars_per_sentence wanted.
Words per sentence: 43.625 20.7667163134 210% => Less words per sentence wanted.
Discourse Markers: 15.625 7.06120827912 221% => Less transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 10.0 5.01903807615 199% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 5.0 8.67935871743 58% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.9879759519 50% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.165398733994 0.244688304435 68% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0646815152712 0.084324248473 77% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0440442177714 0.0667982634062 66% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0977746563751 0.151304729494 65% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0354884261775 0.056905535591 62% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 23.6 13.0946893788 180% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 36.29 50.2224549098 72% => OK
smog_index: 11.2 7.44779559118 150% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 18.9 11.3001002004 167% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.2 12.4159519038 98% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.21 8.58950901804 107% => OK
difficult_words: 76.0 78.4519038076 97% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 19.0 9.78957915832 194% => OK
gunning_fog: 19.2 10.1190380762 190% => OK
text_standard: 19.0 10.7795591182 176% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 89.8876404494 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 8.0 Out of 9
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