The average standard of people's health is likely to be lower in the future than it is now.
To what extent do you agree or disagree with this statement?
Give reasons for your answer and include any relevant examples from your own knowledge or experience.
In today's fast paced work lifestyle, health is mostly ignored. The roundabout status of populace's wellbeing is expected to be on downside in coming years compared with its present. In my opinion, I completely agree with above statement. Following paragraphs will explain in details of same.
Presently, industrialisation and modernisation is making people busy in accomplishing their work priorities. They are following sedentary lifestyle. Although there is much convenience and comfort, it is detrimental to heath and wellbeing. Most officegoers are having a bus or car pick up, air conditioned offices, junk food such as pizza or burger in lunch and mostly a seating desk job with minimal physical activity. No doubt such lifestyle results into long-term health problems such as Diabetis, Blood Pressure, Arthritis and so on.
These present day situation is so scary, what will be future trend of such work-life imbalance? There will be increased work load, more targets, and future seems to be bleak with respect to the health of employees, employers due to cut-throat competition. Lifestyle will be more mechanical. Human beings will be considered as tools to complete project, and valued not less that a machines. This trend will be aggrevated by population explosion, availability of more tech-savvy or capable workforce. Other than work, people will also be more occupied by social networking and peer pressure to be in touch online, worsening their family life, due to less time spending with them. In coming years, physical and mental health will be at stake.
To sum up, increased work pressure will definitely cause work-life imbalance, and overall effect on wellbeing of human beings will be on increase. Remedy for this will be investing time in yoga, exercise, more time with family, reducing burden of work on self.
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 378, Rule ID: A_PLURAL[1]
Message: Don't use indefinite articles with plural words. Did you mean 'a machine' or simply 'machines'?
Suggestion: a machine; machines
...plete project, and valued not less that a machines. This trend will be aggrevated by popul...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, if, so, well, as to, no doubt, such as, in my opinion, to sum up, with respect to
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 20.0 13.1623246493 152% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 11.0 7.85571142285 140% => OK
Conjunction : 13.0 10.4138276553 125% => OK
Relative clauses : 1.0 7.30460921844 14% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 12.0 24.0651302605 50% => OK
Preposition: 43.0 41.998997996 102% => OK
Nominalization: 9.0 8.3376753507 108% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1547.0 1615.20841683 96% => OK
No of words: 292.0 315.596192385 93% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.29794520548 5.12529762239 103% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.13376432452 4.20363070211 98% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.91470950964 2.80592935109 104% => OK
Unique words: 181.0 176.041082164 103% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.619863013699 0.561755894193 110% => OK
syllable_count: 476.1 506.74238477 94% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 5.43587174349 92% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 3.0 0.809619238477 371% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 4.0 4.76152304609 84% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 18.0 16.0721442886 112% => OK
Sentence length: 16.0 20.2975951904 79% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 43.5993614745 49.4020404114 88% => OK
Chars per sentence: 85.9444444444 106.682146367 81% => OK
Words per sentence: 16.2222222222 20.7667163134 78% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.83333333333 7.06120827912 68% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.01903807615 20% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 8.67935871743 69% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 6.0 3.9879759519 150% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 6.0 3.4128256513 176% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.135282002286 0.244688304435 55% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0470027105029 0.084324248473 56% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0336060821342 0.0667982634062 50% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0817838433144 0.151304729494 54% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0343744636266 0.056905535591 60% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.6 13.0946893788 89% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 55.24 50.2224549098 110% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.5 11.3001002004 84% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.16 12.4159519038 106% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.57 8.58950901804 111% => OK
difficult_words: 95.0 78.4519038076 121% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 6.5 9.78957915832 66% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.4 10.1190380762 83% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 10.7795591182 93% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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