Because most information about culture and history can be found on the internet today, musems are not necessary.
To what extent do you agree or disagree?
Some people think that the majority of data on culture and history of different civilizations might be found though Google site. Therefore, they believe that people may refuse to have museums. I completely disagree with this point of view, and I think that museums must remain as part of people's life. Moreover, they complete humans' knowledge, which they get through the global network.
First of all, museums are historical and cultural heritage. They keep knowledge of all existed civilizations and preserve artifacts. For instance, when man attends a museum, he may feel himself in that period of time. Any picture from the internet, could not give these emotions and feelings. It also helps to understand the current situation that is occurring now, because history is always repeated. That is why, I think that museums are necessary.
Secondly, museums encourage children to study and know more. For example, Natural History Museum, which is situated in London, The United Kingdom, has various sections that reveal the history of life. Men can see human's evolution, dinosaurs, space section and so on. Furthermore, all these exhibition sites motivate students to know more about science and history and comprehend mechanisms of the life cycle. All these facts prove the necessity of museums.
To conclude, even if some people think that museums are not necessary, because of the development of the internet, that is not so. Museums are historic and cultural heritage, the instrument of education. I think that museums will exist even if they change their shape.
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 327, Rule ID: POSSESIVE_APOSTROPHE[2]
Message: Possible typo: apostrophe is missing. Did you mean 'humans'' or 'human's'?
Suggestion: humans'; human's
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Line 3, column 203, Rule ID: PERIOD_OF_TIME[1]
Message: Use simply 'period'.
Suggestion: period
...s a museum, he may feel himself in that period of time. Any picture from the internet, could n...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, first, furthermore, if, may, moreover, second, secondly, so, therefore, for example, for instance, i think, first of all
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 10.0 13.1623246493 76% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 7.0 7.85571142285 89% => OK
Conjunction : 10.0 10.4138276553 96% => OK
Relative clauses : 14.0 7.30460921844 192% => OK
Pronoun: 28.0 24.0651302605 116% => OK
Preposition: 26.0 41.998997996 62% => OK
Nominalization: 9.0 8.3376753507 108% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1328.0 1615.20841683 82% => OK
No of words: 252.0 315.596192385 80% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.26984126984 5.12529762239 103% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.98428260373 4.20363070211 95% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.61654522107 2.80592935109 93% => OK
Unique words: 155.0 176.041082164 88% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.615079365079 0.561755894193 109% => OK
syllable_count: 412.2 506.74238477 81% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 10.0 5.43587174349 184% => OK
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 4.0 2.10420841683 190% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 4.76152304609 42% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 18.0 16.0721442886 112% => OK
Sentence length: 14.0 20.2975951904 69% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 30.613883722 49.4020404114 62% => OK
Chars per sentence: 73.7777777778 106.682146367 69% => OK
Words per sentence: 14.0 20.7667163134 67% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.0 7.06120827912 99% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 5.01903807615 40% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 4.0 8.67935871743 46% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.9879759519 50% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 12.0 3.4128256513 352% => Less facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.117301948003 0.244688304435 48% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0345085543248 0.084324248473 41% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.037360716177 0.0667982634062 56% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0700941949569 0.151304729494 46% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.00701926630496 0.056905535591 12% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 10.4 13.0946893788 79% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 57.27 50.2224549098 114% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 8.8 11.3001002004 78% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.69 12.4159519038 102% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.72 8.58950901804 102% => OK
difficult_words: 70.0 78.4519038076 89% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 7.0 9.78957915832 72% => OK
gunning_fog: 7.6 10.1190380762 75% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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More content wanted.
Rates: 61.797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.5 Out of 9
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