Being a celebrity - such as a famous film star or sports personality - brings problems as well as benefits.
Do you think that being a celebrity brings more benefits or more problems?
Fame and what comes with it has been a controversial topic for years across borders. Despite the belief of numerous advantages, there are also people thinking that this can be destructive to celebrities themselves.
Obvious benefits can be observed. The first is the high level of self-satisfaction one may have resulted from the awareness that they’re remembered, loved, and welcome wherever they go. Secondly, there are a great many opportunities for these humans to make extra income. Much more generous salaries in their main profession are one. Another impressive source could be from participating in TV shows and advertising contracts. Furthermore, well-known people such as A-level actors or tennis champions might be offered chances to meet and stay connected with elite-class figures of society who are typically out of reach for commoners. In brief, a celebrity’s life can be heightened significantly in several aspects.
However, the harm is thought to be vast. The initial good feelings may occur but they’re unlikely to last long due to every human’s nature to adapt. Besides, the eye-opening effects on salary and finance-related benefits can be instant but these could be overwhelming and even counterproductive for certain groups. Historically, a large number of underaged Disney stars, for example, have had their childhood ruined because of acquiring too much money and fame at teenage age. Additionally, privacy is usually a problematic issue especially in personal relationships with friends and families because people want to know everything about them. On top of losing the freedom to live their own lives, reputable figures are seen to be extremely vulnerable to public sides either good or bad. Once things go wrong for some reason, its consequences on these people and those who are involved with them are devastating. In summary, the costs popular figures have to pay in exchange for their above-standard lives are proven profound.
In conclusion, while there might be plenty of bonuses of being famous, it also takes away a certain level of freedom as well as provides high exposure to dark sides of society. In other words, the problems of being a celebrity outperform the benefits of it.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, besides, but, first, furthermore, however, if, may, second, secondly, so, well, while, for example, in brief, in conclusion, in summary, such as, as well as, in other words
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 24.0 13.1623246493 182% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 10.0 7.85571142285 127% => OK
Conjunction : 13.0 10.4138276553 125% => OK
Relative clauses : 4.0 7.30460921844 55% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 21.0 24.0651302605 87% => OK
Preposition: 48.0 41.998997996 114% => OK
Nominalization: 2.0 8.3376753507 24% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1884.0 1615.20841683 117% => OK
No of words: 354.0 315.596192385 112% => OK
Chars per words: 5.32203389831 5.12529762239 104% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.33761313653 4.20363070211 103% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.06877449013 2.80592935109 109% => OK
Unique words: 227.0 176.041082164 129% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.641242937853 0.561755894193 114% => OK
syllable_count: 598.5 506.74238477 118% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 2.0 5.43587174349 37% => OK
Article: 8.0 2.52805611222 316% => Less articles wanted as sentence beginning.
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 6.0 4.76152304609 126% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 19.0 16.0721442886 118% => OK
Sentence length: 18.0 20.2975951904 89% => OK
Sentence length SD: 46.946188326 49.4020404114 95% => OK
Chars per sentence: 99.1578947368 106.682146367 93% => OK
Words per sentence: 18.6315789474 20.7667163134 90% => OK
Discourse Markers: 9.36842105263 7.06120827912 133% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 5.01903807615 40% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 14.0 8.67935871743 161% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 3.9879759519 100% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.224674799025 0.244688304435 92% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0717178742182 0.084324248473 85% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0823503708189 0.0667982634062 123% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.150881850495 0.151304729494 100% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0732769628519 0.056905535591 129% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.9 13.0946893788 99% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 44.75 50.2224549098 89% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.5 11.3001002004 102% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.58 12.4159519038 109% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.21 8.58950901804 107% => OK
difficult_words: 105.0 78.4519038076 134% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 7.5 9.78957915832 77% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.2 10.1190380762 91% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 84.2696629213 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.5 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.