The best way for governments to solve the problem of traffic congestion is providing free public transport in 24 hours per day, and seven days a week. To what extent do you agree or disagree?
It is sometimes argued that public transport should be offered in public all days a week to decline the increase of traffic jam. While I totally agree with the idea of making such type of program, I believe that this plan could not benefit to some extent.
On the one hand, to decrease the rate of stuck in traffic; the executive branch should invest the public transport system in their country. This solution will decelerate the number of private vehicles on the street, for example, in rush hours. As a result, the snarl-up will significantly reduce.
However, I suggest that this decision will not be accepted. First and foremost, the cost of investing the public transport is always high, therefore, governments will lack of a huge amount of money to this problem and there are other demands need to be expensed like education, health service, environment… Secondly, it will be wasteful at the time from midnight to early morning because a mere minority of travelers goes out at this time.
In conclusion, public transport is sort of solving many problems of rush hour, however, this measure would be ineffective because of high cost and another disadvantages.
Transition Words or Phrases used:
first, however, if, second, secondly, so, therefore, while, for example, in conclusion, sort of, as a result
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 9.0 13.1623246493 68% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 10.0 7.85571142285 127% => OK
Conjunction : 3.0 10.4138276553 29% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 3.0 7.30460921844 41% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 15.0 24.0651302605 62% => OK
Preposition: 32.0 41.998997996 76% => OK
Nominalization: 2.0 8.3376753507 24% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 983.0 1615.20841683 61% => OK
No of words: 196.0 315.596192385 62% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.01530612245 5.12529762239 98% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.74165738677 4.20363070211 89% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.69578530933 2.80592935109 96% => OK
Unique words: 125.0 176.041082164 71% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.637755102041 0.561755894193 114% => OK
syllable_count: 303.3 506.74238477 60% => syllable counts are too short.
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 5.43587174349 110% => OK
Article: 3.0 2.52805611222 119% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.76152304609 84% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 8.0 16.0721442886 50% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 24.0 20.2975951904 118% => OK
Sentence length SD: 96.673338491 49.4020404114 196% => OK
Chars per sentence: 122.875 106.682146367 115% => OK
Words per sentence: 24.5 20.7667163134 118% => OK
Discourse Markers: 13.5 7.06120827912 191% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 5.01903807615 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 3.0 8.67935871743 35% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 3.9879759519 100% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.164884995309 0.244688304435 67% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0679306732316 0.084324248473 81% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0641423516662 0.0667982634062 96% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.105743972322 0.151304729494 70% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0522152769957 0.056905535591 92% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.5 13.0946893788 111% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 55.58 50.2224549098 111% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.5 11.3001002004 102% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.13 12.4159519038 98% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.85 8.58950901804 103% => OK
difficult_words: 50.0 78.4519038076 64% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 9.78957915832 82% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.6 10.1190380762 115% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.7795591182 111% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Minimum 250 words wanted.
Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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