The best way for governments to solve the problem of traffic congestion is providing free public transport in 24 hours per day, and seven days a week.
To what extent do you agree or disagree?
Traffic jam is an important problem that many nations have to suffer. Some solutions were made by the government to solve this problem. One of them is providing free public transport all day, in both daytime and night time. In my opinion, it is not the best measure and other methods should be taken.
Providing free public transport in twenty – four hours perday, seven days a week is a good solution. This can reduce the quantity of transport that active on the road. Instead of driving a car by oneself, now many people can go to work in a same car. This solution may minimise traffic congestion significantly.
However, it is not the best way to solve the traffic jam phenomenon because of its disadvantages. It is difficult for the government to continuously provide public transport all day, even in the late night. The government have to pay the expenses of coal or oil and the salary of workers. If public transport is free providing, the government may not have enough money to make the payments in the long term. This may put pressure on the public purse because the budget of the government is limited and it have to be spent on a great number of problems. Moreover, in the case of emergency, people will still use private transport because public transport has it own time, and it is not flexible for people in many circumstances.
In conclusion, I firmly hold the view that I disagree with this opinion because of its disadvantages mentioned above.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
however, if, may, moreover, so, still, in conclusion, in my opinion
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 12.0 13.1623246493 91% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 7.0 7.85571142285 89% => OK
Conjunction : 6.0 10.4138276553 58% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 3.0 7.30460921844 41% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 21.0 24.0651302605 87% => OK
Preposition: 34.0 41.998997996 81% => OK
Nominalization: 8.0 8.3376753507 96% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1212.0 1615.20841683 75% => OK
No of words: 257.0 315.596192385 81% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.71595330739 5.12529762239 92% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.00390054096 4.20363070211 95% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.73005381649 2.80592935109 97% => OK
Unique words: 140.0 176.041082164 80% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.544747081712 0.561755894193 97% => OK
syllable_count: 379.8 506.74238477 75% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 7.0 5.43587174349 129% => OK
Interrogative: 0.0 0.384769539078 0% => OK
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 4.76152304609 105% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 15.0 16.0721442886 93% => OK
Sentence length: 17.0 20.2975951904 84% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 30.8540651022 49.4020404114 62% => OK
Chars per sentence: 80.8 106.682146367 76% => OK
Words per sentence: 17.1333333333 20.7667163134 83% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.46666666667 7.06120827912 63% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 5.01903807615 40% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 5.0 8.67935871743 58% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 9.0 3.9879759519 226% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.327594885237 0.244688304435 134% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.103822614586 0.084324248473 123% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0865109964271 0.0667982634062 130% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.174340150616 0.151304729494 115% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0857476669355 0.056905535591 151% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 9.4 13.0946893788 72% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 62.68 50.2224549098 125% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 8.7 11.3001002004 77% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 9.8 12.4159519038 79% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.67 8.58950901804 89% => OK
difficult_words: 52.0 78.4519038076 66% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 6.0 9.78957915832 61% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.8 10.1190380762 87% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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