The best way to solve the world’s environmental problems to increase the costs of fuels. Do you agree or disagree??
Environmental problems, at the turn of 21st century, has been usually experienced such as glacier melting and the greenhouse effect. Some people argue that an appropriate solution is raise of fuel prices. I agree with this viewpoint, but there should be some limits.
It is an undeniable fact that fuels are used by most vehicles. There is gases emission which harm to human and global. For this reason, some potential solution is increasing cost of petrol which could be the chain effect to minimize the amount of released exhaust. Secondly, reduced car uses which decline consumption of natural resources as deforesting green areas for factories’ construction. Besides, current traffic would less intense and logistic system could flow fluently as compared with the past. However, authorities should classify automobiles and then set the reasonable price of gasoline. For instance, trucks could produce enormous number of harmful gases as compared with personal cars. Then, cost of fuels should calculate from gasses emission rate in addition to avoid protest from some people in the society.
On the other hand, this remedy could affect to employment. For example, if many companies cope with multiplied fuels price by firing a vast number of drivers, they will directly increase duty to government. Spending the money for cure unemployed person as compensation would be blamed by opponents. People tend to face high crime rate frequently. According to oil and gas production is owned by foreigner firms, it has to move to neighbor countries due to deal with high transportation cost. Lastly, public transportation will be not enough, if demanding use exceeds current capability.
In conclusion, following settlement as mentioned above. The government should address in the way which not critically influence to its people and economy. As far as I am concerned, all citizens might think they are forced to go along with this plan.
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 54, Rule ID: ADVERB_WORD_ORDER[8]
Message: The adverb 'usually' is usually put between 'has' and 'been'.
Suggestion: has usually been
... problems, at the turn of 21st century, has been usually experienced such as glacier melting and...
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Line 3, column 64, Rule ID: THERE_S_MANY[3]
Message: Did you mean 'There are gases'?
Suggestion: There are gases
...t that fuels are used by most vehicles. There is gases emission which harm to human and global...
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Line 5, column 588, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...manding use exceeds current capability. In conclusion, following settlement as m...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
besides, but, however, if, lastly, second, secondly, so, then, as for, as to, for example, for instance, in addition, in conclusion, such as, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 12.0 13.1623246493 91% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 13.0 7.85571142285 165% => OK
Conjunction : 7.0 10.4138276553 67% => OK
Relative clauses : 6.0 7.30460921844 82% => OK
Pronoun: 13.0 24.0651302605 54% => OK
Preposition: 40.0 41.998997996 95% => OK
Nominalization: 14.0 8.3376753507 168% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1640.0 1615.20841683 102% => OK
No of words: 308.0 315.596192385 98% => OK
Chars per words: 5.32467532468 5.12529762239 104% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.18926351222 4.20363070211 100% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.85178068253 2.80592935109 102% => OK
Unique words: 201.0 176.041082164 114% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.652597402597 0.561755894193 116% => OK
syllable_count: 495.0 506.74238477 98% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 5.43587174349 92% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 2.10420841683 143% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.76152304609 84% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 20.0 16.0721442886 124% => OK
Sentence length: 15.0 20.2975951904 74% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 32.6229980229 49.4020404114 66% => OK
Chars per sentence: 82.0 106.682146367 77% => OK
Words per sentence: 15.4 20.7667163134 74% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.95 7.06120827912 113% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 5.01903807615 60% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 8.67935871743 92% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 7.0 3.9879759519 176% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 5.0 3.4128256513 147% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.0667113641008 0.244688304435 27% => The similarity between the topic and the content is low.
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0167697208878 0.084324248473 20% => Sentence topic similarity is low.
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0217851439199 0.0667982634062 33% => Sentences are similar to each other.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0386482815741 0.151304729494 26% => Maybe some paragraphs are off the topic.
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0104266362103 0.056905535591 18% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.3 13.0946893788 86% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 56.25 50.2224549098 112% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.1 11.3001002004 81% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.28 12.4159519038 107% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.56 8.58950901804 111% => OK
difficult_words: 101.0 78.4519038076 129% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 6.5 9.78957915832 66% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.0 10.1190380762 79% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 10.7795591182 93% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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It is not exactly right on the topic in the view of e-grader. Maybe there is a wrong essay topic.
Rates: 11.2359550562 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 1.0 Out of 9
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