Big salary is much more important than job satisfaction.
Do you agree or disagree?
Provide relevant examples if necessary.
As materialism is soaring, people now often desire well-paid jobs. However, I wholeheartedly disagree with the opinion that a high salary is more crucial than job satisfaction.
To begin with, a good salary cannot give you motivation to work if you are not keen on your current job. I agree that a good amount of money gives us a sense of satisfaction, but it is just temporary. This is due to the fact that people adapt to their new wage level over time and end up desiring more money. Furthermore, when you follow passion instead of money, you cannot do the best to your ability, which leads to poor performance. In the end, this situation is likely to result in job termination.
On top of that, well-paid but not satisfying jobs could make you lead a miserable life. Earning a high salary is important since you have a family to take care of and several bills to pay. However, if you have no incentive to get out of your bed in the morning because you dread your job so much, I think you should opt for a job that you are actually interested in. We spend almost a third of our lives working, thus we need to find enjoyment and happiness in our jobs. At the end of the day, we are working to live our lives peacefully. Therefore, if you are passionate about what you are doing and put your best foot forward, I believe that you will be both personally and professionally happy.
In conclusion, although well-paid jobs rid your life of worries about monthly bills, my firm conviction is that job satisfaction can help you to move your career ladder and lead a more blissful life.
Transition Words or Phrases used:
actually, but, furthermore, however, if, so, therefore, third, thus, well, i think, in conclusion, to begin with, on top of that
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 13.0 13.1623246493 99% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 7.0 7.85571142285 89% => OK
Conjunction : 8.0 10.4138276553 77% => OK
Relative clauses : 9.0 7.30460921844 123% => OK
Pronoun: 44.0 24.0651302605 183% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 37.0 41.998997996 88% => OK
Nominalization: 9.0 8.3376753507 108% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1306.0 1615.20841683 81% => OK
No of words: 289.0 315.596192385 92% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.51903114187 5.12529762239 88% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.12310562562 4.20363070211 98% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.64108378726 2.80592935109 94% => OK
Unique words: 174.0 176.041082164 99% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.602076124567 0.561755894193 107% => OK
syllable_count: 411.3 506.74238477 81% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.60771543086 87% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 10.0 5.43587174349 184% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 5.0 2.10420841683 238% => Less adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 4.76152304609 105% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 14.0 16.0721442886 87% => OK
Sentence length: 20.0 20.2975951904 99% => OK
Sentence length SD: 39.3049952686 49.4020404114 80% => OK
Chars per sentence: 93.2857142857 106.682146367 87% => OK
Words per sentence: 20.6428571429 20.7667163134 99% => OK
Discourse Markers: 9.14285714286 7.06120827912 129% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 5.01903807615 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 8.67935871743 92% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 3.9879759519 75% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.4128256513 88% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.265213835444 0.244688304435 108% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0847422368044 0.084324248473 100% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.065393202604 0.0667982634062 98% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.153999437733 0.151304729494 102% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.021036976571 0.056905535591 37% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 10.2 13.0946893788 78% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 68.1 50.2224549098 136% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 8.7 11.3001002004 77% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 8.94 12.4159519038 72% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.31 8.58950901804 85% => OK
difficult_words: 49.0 78.4519038076 62% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 8.5 9.78957915832 87% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.0 10.1190380762 99% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 61.797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.5 Out of 9
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