Big salary is much more important than job satisfaction.
Do you agree or disagree? Provide relevant example
It is believed that large wage is more significant than being satisfied. However, I completely disagree with this statement and I think that anyone might get a big salary if they like what they do.
First of all, a feeling of satisfaction after performing work makes you happier. In other words, if a person like what he does, he will feel himself more psychologically comfortable. For instance, according to the studies of the American National Academy lively human gets fifty percent more income than others. In addition, a happy individual realizes himself in his life and have work-life balance. He or she performs better at the workplace rather than human who, works for money without any pleasure. In the result companies make more revenues and increase salaries. Therefore, job fulfilment is more valuable and important than just earn a lot of money.
Secondly, a man, who satisfied, makes more progress than human, who works for money. In other words, when an employee is dedicated, he thinks out of the box and produces more ideas and improvements. Steve Jobs, for example, is someone, who was perfectionist and did everything with great dedication. Jobs became the richest man in the world, because of his attitude to his responsibilities and his aim to get gratification. So, work fulfilment might make a person to become wealthy and grows by career ladder.
To conclude, high income is not more crucial than job pleasure. I think that big salary and job satisfaction is strongly tied. If anyone gets work enjoyment, he or she will get high income afterwards.
Transition Words or Phrases used:
first, however, if, second, secondly, so, therefore, for example, for instance, i think, in addition, first of all, in other words
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 9.0 13.1623246493 68% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 4.0 7.85571142285 51% => OK
Conjunction : 12.0 10.4138276553 115% => OK
Relative clauses : 8.0 7.30460921844 110% => OK
Pronoun: 24.0 24.0651302605 100% => OK
Preposition: 25.0 41.998997996 60% => More preposition wanted.
Nominalization: 11.0 8.3376753507 132% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1327.0 1615.20841683 82% => OK
No of words: 262.0 315.596192385 83% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.06488549618 5.12529762239 99% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.02323427807 4.20363070211 96% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.87390133757 2.80592935109 102% => OK
Unique words: 157.0 176.041082164 89% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.599236641221 0.561755894193 107% => OK
syllable_count: 414.9 506.74238477 82% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 7.0 5.43587174349 129% => OK
Article: 3.0 2.52805611222 119% => OK
Subordination: 4.0 2.10420841683 190% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 7.0 4.76152304609 147% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 17.0 16.0721442886 106% => OK
Sentence length: 15.0 20.2975951904 74% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 21.0140832658 49.4020404114 43% => The essay contains lots of sentences with the similar length. More sentence varieties wanted.
Chars per sentence: 78.0588235294 106.682146367 73% => OK
Words per sentence: 15.4117647059 20.7667163134 74% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.64705882353 7.06120827912 108% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 5.01903807615 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 15.0 8.67935871743 173% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.9879759519 50% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 3.4128256513 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.196788363201 0.244688304435 80% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0666801223324 0.084324248473 79% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0615829284052 0.0667982634062 92% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.131821383544 0.151304729494 87% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0445609266088 0.056905535591 78% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 10.1 13.0946893788 77% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 56.25 50.2224549098 112% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.1 11.3001002004 81% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.77 12.4159519038 95% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.18 8.58950901804 95% => OK
difficult_words: 63.0 78.4519038076 80% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 8.5 9.78957915832 87% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.0 10.1190380762 79% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 61.797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.5 Out of 9
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