Both women and men have full time job. It is logical that they should share the housework tasks equally, to what extent you agree or disagree with the statement?
Gone are the days when women used to be treated as puppets and slaves and were behaved so badly .Women now a days are rubbing shoulder with men and proving themselves in every sector of professionalism .Here my statement ask whether men and women ought to share household tasks equally or not as both are the bread winner. in this essay, i would like to give my views for and against of the statement
To start with, women and men both are human and both of them have equal rights to do things equally in their personal life as well as in professional. If a man works 8 hours a day equally along with his woman and later on order their women to do household work is completely unacceptable and insane. Both of them have god made body and it is natural to get tired after hard day so both of them should share their work equally.Sharing household work among men and women help them to strengthen their relation and it gives immense pleasure to women watching their partners helping them
On the other hand, conventionally, women are thought to be the specialist in household works. since its their pet job so they should do household things along with jobs as they can do it in minutes on the other hand men will take hours for the same work. Women are consider princess of kitchen ,they are more tidy as compare to men and can complete household tasks more significantly so i strongly believe that they should give them go
Though household tasks are not cup of tea of men but it depends on person to person. A genuine man will always find time and will help a working women in household things
In a nutshell,both men and women should complete household tasks as it is said one and one is equal to 11,so doing it together will make it interesting and quick
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Discourse Markers used:
['but', 'if', 'so', 'then', 'well', 'as well as', 'to start with', 'on the other hand']
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance in Part of Speech:
Nouns: 0.251479289941 0.247107548796 102% => OK
Verbs: 0.159763313609 0.15552993741 103% => OK
Adjectives: 0.0680473372781 0.0946569551029 72% => OK
Adverbs: 0.0650887573964 0.0501201869031 130% => OK
Pronouns: 0.0828402366864 0.0437536398559 189% => Too many pronouns. Try not to use 'you, I, they...' as the subject of a sentence
Prepositions: 0.127218934911 0.122223957237 104% => OK
Participles: 0.0355029585799 0.0403219363162 88% => OK
Conjunctions: 2.49655035221 2.80592935109 89% => OK
Infinitives: 0.0384615384615 0.0326786765898 118% => OK
Particles: 0.0 0.00163938923432 0% => More particles wanted.
Determiners: 0.0621301775148 0.0861751148067 72% => OK
Modal_auxiliary: 0.0355029585799 0.0214082191602 166% => OK
WH_determiners: 0.00295857988166 0.0119246538136 25% => More subClauses wanted starting by 'Which, Who, whom, Whose, That.....'
Vocabulary words and sentences:
No of characters: 1771.0 1933.38276553 92% => OK
No of words: 323.0 316.052104208 102% => OK
Chars per words: 5.46604938272 6.10592293882 90% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.23936324884 4.20519365927 101% => OK
words length more than 5 chars: 0.232198142415 0.37474360046 62% => OK
words length more than 6 chars: 0.1826625387 0.284197041944 64% => OK
words length more than 7 chars: 0.108359133127 0.203843217982 53% => OK
words length more than 8 chars: 0.0712074303406 0.137313986986 52% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.49655035221 2.80592935109 89% => OK
Unique words: 161.0 176.041082164 91% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.498452012384 0.560935902166 89% => OK
Word variations: 50.7785643776 60.7401812628 84% => OK
How many sentences: 7.0 16.0911823647 44% => More sentences wanted.
Sentence length: 46.1428571429 20.7725350517 222% => Sentence lengths are too long.
Sentence length SD: 77.3460287492 49.5273876611 156% => OK
Chars per sentence: 37.5666666667 93.4120437189 40% => More chars per sentence wanted.
Words per sentence: 6.85151515152 15.2821509519 45% => More words per sentence wanted.
Discourse Markers: 0.169696969697 0.594174754866 29% => More Discourse Markers wanted.
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.39078156313 114% => OK
Language errors: 21.0 5.01102204409 419% => Too many language errors. Double check essay format, grammar & spelling issues after essay writing.
Readability: 64.4091110128 49.1922392462 131% => OK
Elegance: 1.34615384615 1.69127372897 80% => OK
Coherence and Cohesion:
Topic essay coherence: 0.375424840375 0.332604825255 113% => OK
Sentence sentence coherence: 0.223485740787 0.102734651613 218% => Sentence is so close to another sentence.
Sentence sentence coherence SD: 0.0574332535804 0.0668474354756 86% => OK
Sentence paragraph coherence: 0.685934290807 0.534917948617 128% => OK
Sentence paragraph coherence SD: 0.157908332672 0.148666948902 106% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.20964302249 0.13441755203 156% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0451619667033 0.0742828286743 61% => OK
Paragraph paragraph coherence: 0.28295426759 0.324241079732 87% => OK
Paragraph paragraph coherence SD: 0.0549988272014 0.0640056729886 86% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.229062486461 0.22793763319 100% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0598319769625 0.0582452615562 103% => OK
Task Achievement:
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 8.68436873747 69% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 3.9879759519 25% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 3.41883767535 0% => More neutral sentences wanted.
Positive topic words: 3.0 5.88977955912 51% => OK
Negative topic words: 1.0 2.60220440882 38% => More negative topic words wanted.
Neutral topic words: 0.0 2.00200400802 0% => More neutral topic words wanted.
Total topic words: 4.0 10.493987976 38% => More topic words wanted.
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Rates: 60.5555555556 out of 100
Scores by essay E-rater: 5.5 Out of 9