Bullying is a big problem in many schools. What do you think are the causes of this? What solutions can you suggest? Give reasons for your answer and include any relevant examples from your own knowledge or experience.
Intimidating others is becoming quite common at any place. One of the biggest problems in schools is bullying students by their fellow students. This essay will discuss the main causes and feasible solutions to this problem.
To begin with, Some students treat their other classmates with contempt, especially at schools due to the way of parenting and the surroundings where they live. Firstly, nowadays parents are just giving whatever their children want to continue their professional work without any break. So that children will develop a mindset like money is the only important thing and who don't have what they have are not worthy to be in the school or surroundings. For example, As per one of the researches reports, Around 40% of students are getting bullied by their friends or schoolmates because they are poor and not having good clothing. Not only parenting but in which environment, children are growing up is also important. Even though their parents taught good things to their children, they might get affected by the people with whom he/she usually spends time or stay. For an instance, children with good friends and neighbors are more kind and friendly towards their fellow students.
To solve this problem, parents and neighbors play a vital role. Although parents don't have much time to spend with their children, they must aware of what kind of actions will impart good virtues into their children's minds and should spend their time accordingly instead of buying whatever they want. One more recommended solution to tackle this issue is that people in the society should do good actions then it will help develop kind and positivity in children mindset.
In conclusion, Even bullying became a big problem in most schools, considering the given solutions will be helpful to control this kind of attitude in children.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
accordingly, also, but, first, firstly, so, then, for example, in conclusion, kind of, to begin with
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 13.0 13.1623246493 99% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 9.0 7.85571142285 115% => OK
Conjunction : 13.0 10.4138276553 125% => OK
Relative clauses : 6.0 7.30460921844 82% => OK
Pronoun: 27.0 24.0651302605 112% => OK
Preposition: 42.0 41.998997996 100% => OK
Nominalization: 3.0 8.3376753507 36% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1548.0 1615.20841683 96% => OK
No of words: 303.0 315.596192385 96% => OK
Chars per words: 5.10891089109 5.12529762239 100% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.17215713816 4.20363070211 99% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.51958962192 2.80592935109 90% => OK
Unique words: 173.0 176.041082164 98% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.57095709571 0.561755894193 102% => OK
syllable_count: 441.0 506.74238477 87% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 5.43587174349 55% => OK
Article: 0.0 2.52805611222 0% => OK
Subordination: 4.0 2.10420841683 190% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 4.76152304609 105% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 14.0 16.0721442886 87% => OK
Sentence length: 21.0 20.2975951904 103% => OK
Sentence length SD: 49.7272663677 49.4020404114 101% => OK
Chars per sentence: 110.571428571 106.682146367 104% => OK
Words per sentence: 21.6428571429 20.7667163134 104% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.14285714286 7.06120827912 101% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 5.01903807615 60% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 8.67935871743 92% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 6.0 3.9879759519 150% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 3.4128256513 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.112134596807 0.244688304435 46% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0504811896435 0.084324248473 60% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0408053900626 0.0667982634062 61% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0965290830305 0.151304729494 64% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0425312385486 0.056905535591 75% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.5 13.0946893788 103% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 58.62 50.2224549098 117% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.3 11.3001002004 91% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.36 12.4159519038 100% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.17 8.58950901804 95% => OK
difficult_words: 67.0 78.4519038076 85% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 9.78957915832 82% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.4 10.1190380762 103% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 10.7795591182 93% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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