Buying things on the Internet, such as books, air tickets, and groceries, is becoming more and more popular. Do the advantages of shopping in this way outweigh the disadvantages?
The idea for purchasing any item such as household needs and tickets for traveling through online-shop can lead to impulsive behavior. Although this might be acceptable, this gives more opportunities for buyers to receive fake items, surpassing any benefits.
It is true that the rise of online stores tends to motivate people to buy anything, and it encourages them to buy kinds of stuff unnaturally so that more often to lead shoppers are wasting their money. Despite the fact that seems unusual, the technology of shopping on the Internet is easy to use and very fast to receive goods. However, since shopping can be very short by simply clicking the button on the gadget, it creates them to buy the item that is not really necessary and turn out to be just stored in warehouses. For example, 70% of money spent by teenagers is on online shopping due to the needs they buy looking unique and cute even though they still have them.
Another negative impact from that technology is buyers more often obtain an item that is not true to expectations such as a spurious item. In spite of that might be reasonable, using the Internet for shopping is very helpful for people who are busy due to easily use in every situation where ever they need. Nevertheless, it is difficult to know especially for the elderly to choose a seller who has original goods because they might only see on the screen without touching them first. According to the Jakarta's News In 2019, Shoppe-Corp had many complaints from buyers to sellers, most of them because the seller selling shoes from Nike brand but customers receive imitation ones.
In conclusion, the plethora of consumers is more likely to waste their money due to overspending on the Internet. Furthermore, getting a lot of counterfeit goods when buying on Internet-based is still common, although there is still a slight positive impact.
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 613, Rule ID: BUY_VBG[1]
Message: Did you mean 'by'?
Suggestion: by
...n online shopping due to the needs they buy looking unique and cute even though the...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, first, furthermore, however, if, look, nevertheless, really, so, still, for example, in conclusion, such as, in spite of, it is true
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 17.0 13.1623246493 129% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 6.0 7.85571142285 76% => OK
Conjunction : 6.0 10.4138276553 58% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 11.0 7.30460921844 151% => OK
Pronoun: 24.0 24.0651302605 100% => OK
Preposition: 47.0 41.998997996 112% => OK
Nominalization: 2.0 8.3376753507 24% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1568.0 1615.20841683 97% => OK
No of words: 320.0 315.596192385 101% => OK
Chars per words: 4.9 5.12529762239 96% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.22948505376 4.20363070211 101% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.65835210939 2.80592935109 95% => OK
Unique words: 181.0 176.041082164 103% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.565625 0.561755894193 101% => OK
syllable_count: 486.9 506.74238477 96% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 5.43587174349 74% => OK
Article: 3.0 2.52805611222 119% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 2.10420841683 143% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 4.76152304609 105% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 12.0 16.0721442886 75% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 26.0 20.2975951904 128% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 29.3224411596 49.4020404114 59% => The essay contains lots of sentences with the similar length. More sentence varieties wanted.
Chars per sentence: 130.666666667 106.682146367 122% => OK
Words per sentence: 26.6666666667 20.7667163134 128% => OK
Discourse Markers: 11.4166666667 7.06120827912 162% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.01903807615 20% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 8.67935871743 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 3.9879759519 100% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.161479441942 0.244688304435 66% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0625571347631 0.084324248473 74% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0366049787346 0.0667982634062 55% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.105658345249 0.151304729494 70% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0292253397128 0.056905535591 51% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 15.0 13.0946893788 115% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 53.55 50.2224549098 107% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 12.3 11.3001002004 109% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.44 12.4159519038 92% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.82 8.58950901804 103% => OK
difficult_words: 79.0 78.4519038076 101% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 14.0 9.78957915832 143% => OK
gunning_fog: 12.4 10.1190380762 123% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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