These days, online shopping has been becoming more and more popular with a variety of products being sold, from books, air tickets, clothes to household commodities. This way of shopping brings lots of benefits as well as latent drawbacks which are both discussed in the following essay.
On the positive side, online shopping brings comfort to many buyers, especially digital natives. Accordingly, these people only need smart devices such as an iPhone or a laptop to enter some online garment shop to get masses of clothes with different types, colours, designs... In the next two days or more, these clothes will be delivered to the exact location of the customers, such a convenient transaction! Furthermore, online shopping means fewer people commuting to shopping halls, as a result, the air and noise pollution could easily tumble since there are fewer vehicles on the roads.
On the negative side, despite a range of advantages, the downsides of online shopping need much more consideration. Firstly, to the spenders themselves, shopping on the internet also means that they can not check the products' quality in person. Besides many good quality products, there are a remarkable amount of terrible products as a result of the deception of the sellers. This problem is causing public outrage in many countries including Vietnam. Secondly, although when shopping online, people commute less and produce less emission and annoying noise from vehicles, there are lots of toxic trash due to the delivery techniques. Comparing to traditional shopping, the sellers and buyers often reusable bags, which are better for the environment than plastic bags mainly used in packaging by online sellers.
In conclusion, online shopping brings many benefits along with a considerable number of drawbacks. Nevertheless, it seems to me that the advantages are eclipsed by the disadvantages to some extent.
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 305, Rule ID: THERE_RE_MANY[3]
Message: Possible agreement error. Did you mean 'amounts'?
Suggestion: amounts
...uality products, there are a remarkable amount of terrible products as a result of the...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
accordingly, also, besides, first, firstly, furthermore, if, nevertheless, second, secondly, so, well, in conclusion, such as, as a result, as well as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 10.0 13.1623246493 76% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 5.0 7.85571142285 64% => OK
Conjunction : 7.0 10.4138276553 67% => OK
Relative clauses : 5.0 7.30460921844 68% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 11.0 24.0651302605 46% => OK
Preposition: 43.0 41.998997996 102% => OK
Nominalization: 7.0 8.3376753507 84% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1600.0 1615.20841683 99% => OK
No of words: 300.0 315.596192385 95% => OK
Chars per words: 5.33333333333 5.12529762239 104% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.16179145029 4.20363070211 99% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.77040711008 2.80592935109 99% => OK
Unique words: 181.0 176.041082164 103% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.603333333333 0.561755894193 107% => OK
syllable_count: 493.2 506.74238477 97% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 5.43587174349 110% => OK
Article: 3.0 2.52805611222 119% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 8.0 4.76152304609 168% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 16.0721442886 81% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 23.0 20.2975951904 113% => OK
Sentence length SD: 59.8695821257 49.4020404114 121% => OK
Chars per sentence: 123.076923077 106.682146367 115% => OK
Words per sentence: 23.0769230769 20.7667163134 111% => OK
Discourse Markers: 11.5384615385 7.06120827912 163% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.01903807615 20% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 8.67935871743 92% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 3.9879759519 100% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.259124676618 0.244688304435 106% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.082219600641 0.084324248473 98% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0669122360764 0.0667982634062 100% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.160994633292 0.151304729494 106% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0682134502614 0.056905535591 120% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 15.2 13.0946893788 116% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 48.13 50.2224549098 96% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 12.3 11.3001002004 109% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.93 12.4159519038 112% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.41 8.58950901804 110% => OK
difficult_words: 88.0 78.4519038076 112% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 10.5 9.78957915832 107% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.2 10.1190380762 111% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 10.7795591182 102% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 89.8876404494 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 8.0 Out of 9
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