In certain cultures old age is considered to be more important while in others it’s the opposite, children are thought to be more important. Discuss both views and give your opinion.
In some places of this world place old people in a higher part society. In another part of earth, children take important role as the future leader. This essay will argue both of sides.
In Asia, especially Indonesia, Grey age is a time when a person considered as an experienced one. This is why his knowledge and opinion are worth. People believe of their advice. Young people tend to be rush and careless, here, public need to balance in deciding something. Also, Indonesians see grands as their parents, so they suppose to honor old people. Doing bad things to parents means betraying God. God reason is very valuable as long more than half of Indonesian are muslim.
In some productive country, Youngsters are more important than old people. This issue comes from working style in life, that a person is measured from his usefulness in industry. The less productivity of a man the far him of society. This is because more company will avoid him from working. Moreover, grey people often need much help to do their activity, but their children choose to send them to a nursing home. Their family refuse to take their responsibility, because this activity is not productive. People of this residence type are more concern in the future, and children is the main role of the next era.
In my opinion, taking elder people in the high place is a must. As a child of certain parent, I need to remember that my success comes from their pray. A great era will never forget its culture and history, and old people are a part of it. In the same time, focusing in youngsters are important too. Especially in shaping them to be great person who honors the old people
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Suggestion:
... the high place is a must. As a child of certain parent, I need to remember that ...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, if, moreover, so, in my opinion
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 16.0 13.1623246493 122% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 7.0 7.85571142285 89% => OK
Conjunction : 6.0 10.4138276553 58% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 4.0 7.30460921844 55% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 28.0 24.0651302605 116% => OK
Preposition: 39.0 41.998997996 93% => OK
Nominalization: 2.0 8.3376753507 24% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1383.0 1615.20841683 86% => OK
No of words: 294.0 315.596192385 93% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.70408163265 5.12529762239 92% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.14082457966 4.20363070211 99% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.46751535992 2.80592935109 88% => OK
Unique words: 165.0 176.041082164 94% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.561224489796 0.561755894193 100% => OK
syllable_count: 439.2 506.74238477 87% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 7.0 5.43587174349 129% => OK
Interrogative: 0.0 0.384769539078 0% => OK
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 3.0 0.809619238477 371% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 6.0 4.76152304609 126% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 22.0 16.0721442886 137% => OK
Sentence length: 13.0 20.2975951904 64% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 22.9971252246 49.4020404114 47% => The essay contains lots of sentences with the similar length. More sentence varieties wanted.
Chars per sentence: 62.8636363636 106.682146367 59% => More chars_per_sentence wanted.
Words per sentence: 13.3636363636 20.7667163134 64% => OK
Discourse Markers: 1.90909090909 7.06120827912 27% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.01903807615 20% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 12.0 8.67935871743 138% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 5.0 3.9879759519 125% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 5.0 3.4128256513 147% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.164260812108 0.244688304435 67% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0453470605171 0.084324248473 54% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0371175389777 0.0667982634062 56% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0982357115792 0.151304729494 65% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0144901675159 0.056905535591 25% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 7.4 13.0946893788 57% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 66.74 50.2224549098 133% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 7.2 11.3001002004 64% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 9.39 12.4159519038 76% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.61 8.58950901804 89% => OK
difficult_words: 62.0 78.4519038076 79% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 5.0 9.78957915832 51% => Linsear_write_formula is low.
gunning_fog: 7.2 10.1190380762 71% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 10.7795591182 74% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 61.797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.5 Out of 9
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