Childhood obesity has become a serious problem in many countries. Explain the main causes and effects of this problem, and suggest some possible solutions.
Children seem to enjoy eating unhealthy food and playing video games which have various negative effects stemmed from this. This problem will solve if all efforts gather from people and government.
Perhaps the major overweight problem is a poor diet, which this junk food and soft drinks contain a high amount of fat and sugar such as hamburgers, chips, and soft drinks. Added to this the lack of exercise or physical activity resulting from excessive watching TV and play a video game, meaning that children may have a risk of diseases such as diabetes, heart disease, and obesity. There also concerns about play computer games of reflexes due to chat on the internet which often addicted to social media.
The most alarming physical impact of such activities is possible the risk of obesity or inadequate development, meaning children become obsessed with this unhealthy life and unfit. This will undermine their system, which has more illnesses when they have grown up. In addition, there is a psychological impact often accompanies this lifestyle that younger people have no confidence about their shape and be socialized and make a relationship in school, so instead of that, they may become an introverted person. On the other hand, the increasing numbers of obesity among younger that will put high pressure on hospitals, which will be many people do not find a bed to a cure.
Turning to a possible solution, perhaps the immediate step would be to promote more active lifestyles through exercise regimen and sports programs which would help to detoxify the lifestyle of children affected. This could be done through sponsorships of sports, or take part in competitive events such as races and matches, hopefully to ameliorating the physical effect of unhealthy habits. For instance, if the sports champion or figureheads speak out about these dangers, the message may well get through to younger. Second potential remedies for the danger of having obesity, it is the responsibility's parents for making sure that they have a healthy diet, and control what they eat and prefer. For example, if parents let their children eat fast food, it must cut the amount of those meals to once a week or a month. The following step is to encourage children to follow a healthy diet.
In conclusion, the risk of obesity among children has increased in the present due to consuming a lot of junk food. The possible solutions will take years to put them in an action. In the future, it might involve stronger education about the changes and the health benefits of more active purists.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, if, may, second, so, well, for example, for instance, in addition, in conclusion, such as, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 9.0 13.1623246493 68% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 13.0 7.85571142285 165% => OK
Conjunction : 20.0 10.4138276553 192% => OK
Relative clauses : 12.0 7.30460921844 164% => OK
Pronoun: 26.0 24.0651302605 108% => OK
Preposition: 56.0 41.998997996 133% => OK
Nominalization: 7.0 8.3376753507 84% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2170.0 1615.20841683 134% => OK
No of words: 430.0 315.596192385 136% => Less content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.04651162791 5.12529762239 98% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.55372829156 4.20363070211 108% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.60896756133 2.80592935109 93% => OK
Unique words: 234.0 176.041082164 133% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.544186046512 0.561755894193 97% => OK
syllable_count: 661.5 506.74238477 131% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 7.0 5.43587174349 129% => OK
Article: 6.0 2.52805611222 237% => Less articles wanted as sentence beginning.
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 4.0 0.809619238477 494% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 4.0 4.76152304609 84% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 18.0 16.0721442886 112% => OK
Sentence length: 23.0 20.2975951904 113% => OK
Sentence length SD: 51.7445351084 49.4020404114 105% => OK
Chars per sentence: 120.555555556 106.682146367 113% => OK
Words per sentence: 23.8888888889 20.7667163134 115% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.33333333333 7.06120827912 90% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.38176352705 114% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 5.01903807615 60% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 8.67935871743 104% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 7.0 3.9879759519 176% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.4128256513 59% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.118800259407 0.244688304435 49% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.037925787782 0.084324248473 45% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0374080243976 0.0667982634062 56% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0717873638088 0.151304729494 47% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0360159081122 0.056905535591 63% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.3 13.0946893788 109% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 56.59 50.2224549098 113% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.1 11.3001002004 98% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.31 12.4159519038 99% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.63 8.58950901804 100% => OK
difficult_words: 105.0 78.4519038076 134% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 13.0 9.78957915832 133% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.2 10.1190380762 111% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 67.4157303371 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.0 Out of 9
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