Learning a foreign language, in today’s world, is more demanding. Learning foreign enables the thinking ability and reasoning power as well. But, some children do not have access or money to afford foreign language and some children are forced to study in schools/colleges or forced by parents which decrease their potential to study foreign language whereas adults keenness increases their spirit. I disagree with the statement that children are more successful in foreign language studies than adults.
In my opinion, adults get enthusiast in acquiring knowledge when they get mature. Adults have a passion to learn a foreign language which makes them fluent in it and more curious to dig it up till they get expert in it. For example, there are adults who get excited with a country’s culture, environment, theatre etc which excites them to learn more about that country and they study it by initiating it with the language spoken in that country.
On the other hand, some adults take a foreign language as a profession. They take it as course in their bachelors and masters and surpass themselves. For instance, there are multiple big organizations in the world who hire a translator with a huge amount of package. People who have good spoken foreign language apply and continue this as their profession and some continue this for life. And this gives them the opportunity to a greater extent. This will not only increase their passion but also financially strong.
In conclusion, enthusiasm and passion are more important than compelling. I strongly believe that adults get excited about learning a foreign language and therefore, they take this as their profession.
Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, if, so, therefore, thus, well, whereas, for example, for instance, in conclusion, in my opinion, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 6.0 13.1623246493 46% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 1.0 7.85571142285 13% => OK
Conjunction : 14.0 10.4138276553 134% => OK
Relative clauses : 11.0 7.30460921844 151% => OK
Pronoun: 33.0 24.0651302605 137% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 30.0 41.998997996 71% => OK
Nominalization: 2.0 8.3376753507 24% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1418.0 1615.20841683 88% => OK
No of words: 273.0 315.596192385 87% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.19413919414 5.12529762239 101% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.06481385082 4.20363070211 97% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.77933405129 2.80592935109 99% => OK
Unique words: 138.0 176.041082164 78% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.505494505495 0.561755894193 90% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 432.9 506.74238477 85% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 5.43587174349 92% => OK
Article: 0.0 2.52805611222 0% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 2.10420841683 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.76152304609 84% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 15.0 16.0721442886 93% => OK
Sentence length: 18.0 20.2975951904 89% => OK
Sentence length SD: 57.4101810561 49.4020404114 116% => OK
Chars per sentence: 94.5333333333 106.682146367 89% => OK
Words per sentence: 18.2 20.7667163134 88% => OK
Discourse Markers: 8.33333333333 7.06120827912 118% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 5.01903807615 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 12.0 8.67935871743 138% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.9879759519 50% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.239759629904 0.244688304435 98% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0905911097306 0.084324248473 107% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0846499686034 0.0667982634062 127% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.155261779107 0.151304729494 103% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0836955441341 0.056905535591 147% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.1 13.0946893788 92% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 53.21 50.2224549098 106% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.3 11.3001002004 91% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.82 12.4159519038 103% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.58 8.58950901804 100% => OK
difficult_words: 70.0 78.4519038076 89% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 7.5 9.78957915832 77% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.2 10.1190380762 91% => OK
text_standard: 13.0 10.7795591182 121% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 67.4157303371 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.0 Out of 9
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