The fact has shown that when getting older, people's reaction tends to change more often than not because of changes in their awareness, knowledge and character as well. In the essay, how different it is between a child's social behaviour and that of a mature person and how good this phenomenon is shall be examined in detail.
When it comes to the main differences in the form children and adults behave, the first thing is that what children react reflects their instinct while the older always think carefully to have a suitable action for a particular situation. Take people's behaviour in studying, for example, children learn which subjects they love, but the older sometimes have to learn something boring but necessary in their cases. The second one is the way they express their emotions to others. For instance, children easily do something to make their mothers understand how big their love is. By contrast, when they reach a certain age, although they still love their moms, their expression is a bit different, even do anything in silence.
Regarding whether the changes are beneficial in some way, firstly, it contributes significantly to the development of society. To specify, people will realise that they should control their behaviour to suit social standards. For example, they know that stopping their means of transports when the traffic light turns red is true and will help decrease the number of accidents on roads annually. Secondly, the older always want to be a brilliant example for their next generations to follow well. As a result, they will behave better because of knowing that their son/daughter and nephew/niece looking at them and mimic.
To sum up, it is no doubt that people's behaviour will change when they get older. Also, these changes offer some benefits for both individuals and society. Therefore, people should have a good reaction to any case and teach their children to do the same thing.
Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, firstly, if, look, regarding, second, secondly, so, still, therefore, well, while, for example, for instance, no doubt, as a result, to sum up
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 11.0 13.1623246493 84% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 7.0 7.85571142285 89% => OK
Conjunction : 11.0 10.4138276553 106% => OK
Relative clauses : 13.0 7.30460921844 178% => OK
Pronoun: 35.0 24.0651302605 145% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 34.0 41.998997996 81% => OK
Nominalization: 6.0 8.3376753507 72% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1617.0 1615.20841683 100% => OK
No of words: 322.0 315.596192385 102% => OK
Chars per words: 5.02173913043 5.12529762239 98% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.23607819155 4.20363070211 101% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.57013237352 2.80592935109 92% => OK
Unique words: 184.0 176.041082164 105% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.571428571429 0.561755894193 102% => OK
syllable_count: 478.8 506.74238477 94% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 5.43587174349 110% => OK
Article: 4.0 2.52805611222 158% => OK
Subordination: 4.0 2.10420841683 190% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 4.76152304609 105% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 15.0 16.0721442886 93% => OK
Sentence length: 21.0 20.2975951904 103% => OK
Sentence length SD: 45.5512409881 49.4020404114 92% => OK
Chars per sentence: 107.8 106.682146367 101% => OK
Words per sentence: 21.4666666667 20.7667163134 103% => OK
Discourse Markers: 10.6666666667 7.06120827912 151% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 5.01903807615 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 11.0 8.67935871743 127% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.9879759519 50% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.4128256513 59% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.199084410907 0.244688304435 81% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0691621840639 0.084324248473 82% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0390039368259 0.0667982634062 58% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.127867257821 0.151304729494 85% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0260560146642 0.056905535591 46% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.9 13.0946893788 99% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 58.62 50.2224549098 117% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.3 11.3001002004 91% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.84 12.4159519038 95% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.36 8.58950901804 97% => OK
difficult_words: 75.0 78.4519038076 96% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 14.0 9.78957915832 143% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.4 10.1190380762 103% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 10.7795591182 93% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.