It is insisted that there can occur certain changes in the way children behave socially when they reach maturity. From my perspective, the main distinctions between adult and child social behaviour may be improved social interaction as well as the ability to share their opinions.
There are two primary differences between social behaviours of mature and immature person. First, the former develops their capability of communicating with people with whom they are not familiar. They can answer and respond to questions in a manner that appeals to people. In contrast, the latter in these instances can feel pressure and is likely to spoil conversation. Second, those who are older tend to find common ground with people whom they share their opinions and even give advice which is really essential to establish relationships. However, most children often lack this ability as they should be more experienced in order to have an emotional feeling when communicating.
It seems to me that the majority of changes in the way adolescents behave have positive effects on them. One of the reasons is that education plays a big role. Children learn how to behave in public at schools through subjects included in curriculums. These subjects teach youngsters about ethics and principles such as respecting the elderly. Moreover, they learn how to behave through life experiences. For example, they know that if they express their rude behaviour, they can be punished by their parents. Consequently, life lessons can discipline them and show the right path for them.
All in all, I feel that most changes that children undergo seems to be positive ones as there are effectuve approaches such as education ans good parenting that can help achieve this.
Transition Words or Phrases used:
consequently, first, however, if, may, moreover, really, second, so, well, for example, i feel, in contrast, such as, as well as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 12.0 13.1623246493 91% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 8.0 7.85571142285 102% => OK
Conjunction : 7.0 10.4138276553 67% => OK
Relative clauses : 14.0 7.30460921844 192% => OK
Pronoun: 35.0 24.0651302605 145% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 36.0 41.998997996 86% => OK
Nominalization: 4.0 8.3376753507 48% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1470.0 1615.20841683 91% => OK
No of words: 283.0 315.596192385 90% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.19434628975 5.12529762239 101% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.10153676581 4.20363070211 98% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.74503498539 2.80592935109 98% => OK
Unique words: 171.0 176.041082164 97% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.604240282686 0.561755894193 108% => OK
syllable_count: 449.1 506.74238477 89% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 9.0 5.43587174349 166% => OK
Article: 3.0 2.52805611222 119% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 2.10420841683 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 4.76152304609 42% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 16.0 16.0721442886 100% => OK
Sentence length: 17.0 20.2975951904 84% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 37.217634849 49.4020404114 75% => OK
Chars per sentence: 91.875 106.682146367 86% => OK
Words per sentence: 17.6875 20.7667163134 85% => OK
Discourse Markers: 8.0 7.06120827912 113% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 5.01903807615 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 8.67935871743 104% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.9879759519 50% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 5.0 3.4128256513 147% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.217380285922 0.244688304435 89% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0650211470038 0.084324248473 77% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0798865597962 0.0667982634062 120% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.15099680726 0.151304729494 100% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.10646061036 0.056905535591 187% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.9 13.0946893788 91% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 54.22 50.2224549098 108% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.9 11.3001002004 88% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.53 12.4159519038 101% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.94 8.58950901804 104% => OK
difficult_words: 80.0 78.4519038076 102% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.5 9.78957915832 87% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.8 10.1190380762 87% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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