Children should never be educated at home by their parents. Do you agree or disagree? Discuss the advantages and disadvantages for young people who decide to do this.
Youngsters home education does not have to be carried out by their parents. It can be argued that teaching pupils should be left for professionals. this essay will outline the benefits and the drawbacks.
To begin, home schooling children by their parents has its own pros. Firstly, parents will be able to watch the educational progress of their offsprings by teaching them what is right for their level educationally. Also, they are able to spend quality time with them without distractions from other sources. For example, my uncle presently home school his children. Prior to doing this, his wards were performing badly at school. he gave up his job as a secondary school teacher and decided to teach them himself. he discovered that they were studying in an unfamiliar environment and this affected their learning a great deal. Since upon home schooling them, they have thrived brilliantly. Furthermore, he believes they benefit more from one on one attention not many pupils to one teacher.
Nevertheless, home education is not always helpful. Young children might lack social interaction skill which they could have developed if they learn in a school environment and not at home. this can thereby, rob them off their childhood which might have a harmful effect on them later in their adult lives. Likewise, they would miss out on structured educational programs which involves plenty of activities tailored to bring the best out of pupils to prepare them for a better future. In addition, either of the parents or both will have to give up their day jobs to teach their children. this will in no doubt put financial strain on the family. this can be avoided if the offsprings learn in a school environment.
In Conclusion, I do not agree that children need to be home schooled by their parents. this essay have highlighted the advantages and disadvantages of doing this.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, first, firstly, furthermore, if, likewise, nevertheless, second, so, for example, in addition, in conclusion, no doubt
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 11.0 13.1623246493 84% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 13.0 7.85571142285 165% => OK
Conjunction : 6.0 10.4138276553 58% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 6.0 7.30460921844 82% => OK
Pronoun: 46.0 24.0651302605 191% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 45.0 41.998997996 107% => OK
Nominalization: 8.0 8.3376753507 96% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1574.0 1615.20841683 97% => OK
No of words: 314.0 315.596192385 99% => OK
Chars per words: 5.0127388535 5.12529762239 98% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.20951839842 4.20363070211 100% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.74256155447 2.80592935109 98% => OK
Unique words: 178.0 176.041082164 101% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.566878980892 0.561755894193 101% => OK
syllable_count: 461.7 506.74238477 91% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 15.0 5.43587174349 276% => Less pronouns wanted as sentence beginning.
Article: 0.0 2.52805611222 0% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 4.76152304609 105% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 21.0 16.0721442886 131% => OK
Sentence length: 14.0 20.2975951904 69% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 32.8076231394 49.4020404114 66% => OK
Chars per sentence: 74.9523809524 106.682146367 70% => OK
Words per sentence: 14.9523809524 20.7667163134 72% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.90476190476 7.06120827912 84% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 12.0 5.01903807615 239% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 8.67935871743 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 9.0 3.9879759519 226% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 5.0 3.4128256513 147% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.307542032481 0.244688304435 126% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.101420252984 0.084324248473 120% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0831999752326 0.0667982634062 125% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.247828935622 0.151304729494 164% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.112458187582 0.056905535591 198% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 9.6 13.0946893788 73% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 65.73 50.2224549098 131% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 7.6 11.3001002004 67% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.19 12.4159519038 90% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.85 8.58950901804 91% => OK
difficult_words: 70.0 78.4519038076 89% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 5.5 9.78957915832 56% => Linsear_write_formula is low.
gunning_fog: 7.6 10.1190380762 75% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 10.7795591182 74% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.