Compare the advantages and disadvantages of three of the following as media for communicating information. State which three you consider the most effective.
Comic
Books
Radio
Television
Film
Theater
Give reasons for your answer and include any relevant examples from your own knowledge or experience.
In today’s world, communication media has the crucial role in providing the information to the people which help to globally connect the people all around the world. As means of communication over a decades have been increasing rapidly they have greatly changed the world. From my point of view, the most effective medias are books, television and radio. This essay will discuss both benefits and drawbacks of the mentioned medias.
To begin with, books have played vital role in communication which provide the knowledge about many facts and truth around the world. There are many advantages of books while considering as information provider. One of the benefit i they are portable and affordable. Similarly, another advantage is that it provides the deep insight about a particular subject after, reading a book a reader can gain some information about a topic which he or she have never known. Although, books have advantages they do have disadvantages too. The significant drawback is it requires a lot of concentration and patience to read and understand a particular topic.
Similarly, television is also the most effective and reliable means of communication. The benefits of television is that it considered reliable and provide information through different programs. But, owing a television is quiet expensive and all people cannot afford them also. Likewise, radio also has significant role in communication. It broadcasts in almost all the areas of country where the availability of television and books is impossible. It have mainly helped the people from remote areas.
To sum up, communication media have great role in providing the information. Without them, people cannot known about the world, what is happening, what had happened and what will happen. In my opinion, every government should provide the appropriate communication media for all people from different places.
Grammar and spelling errors:
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Message: The pronoun 'she' must be used with a third-person verb: 'has'.
Suggestion: has
...formation about a topic which he or she have never known. Although, books have advan...
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Message: “Although” at the beginning of a sentence requires a 2nd clause. Maybe a comma, question or exclamation mark is missing, or the sentence is incomplete and should be joined with the following sentence.
...topic which he or she have never known. Although, books have advantages they do have dis...
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Message: Possible agreement error. You should probably use: 'are'.
Suggestion: are
...mmunication. The benefits of television is that it considered reliable and provide...
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Suggestion: as well
...nsive and all people cannot afford them also. Likewise, radio also has significant r...
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Message: Did you mean 'has'?
Suggestion: has
... television and books is impossible. It have mainly helped the people from remote ar...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, if, likewise, similarly, so, while, in my opinion, to begin with, to sum up
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 11.0 13.1623246493 84% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 6.0 7.85571142285 76% => OK
Conjunction : 12.0 10.4138276553 115% => OK
Relative clauses : 6.0 7.30460921844 82% => OK
Pronoun: 18.0 24.0651302605 75% => OK
Preposition: 38.0 41.998997996 90% => OK
Nominalization: 15.0 8.3376753507 180% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1613.0 1615.20841683 100% => OK
No of words: 298.0 315.596192385 94% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.41275167785 5.12529762239 106% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.15483772266 4.20363070211 99% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.0203896238 2.80592935109 108% => OK
Unique words: 159.0 176.041082164 90% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.53355704698 0.561755894193 95% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 508.5 506.74238477 100% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 5.43587174349 55% => OK
Article: 3.0 2.52805611222 119% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 6.0 4.76152304609 126% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 19.0 16.0721442886 118% => OK
Sentence length: 15.0 20.2975951904 74% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 37.3797610666 49.4020404114 76% => OK
Chars per sentence: 84.8947368421 106.682146367 80% => OK
Words per sentence: 15.6842105263 20.7667163134 76% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.52631578947 7.06120827912 64% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 7.0 5.01903807615 139% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 12.0 8.67935871743 138% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 3.9879759519 25% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 6.0 3.4128256513 176% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.105845117893 0.244688304435 43% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0345764285381 0.084324248473 41% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0359355412743 0.0667982634062 54% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0674315217796 0.151304729494 45% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0281657681497 0.056905535591 49% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.9 13.0946893788 91% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 47.79 50.2224549098 95% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.3 11.3001002004 91% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.8 12.4159519038 111% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.09 8.58950901804 94% => OK
difficult_words: 70.0 78.4519038076 89% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.5 9.78957915832 87% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.0 10.1190380762 79% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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