Completing university education is thought by some to be the best way to get a good job. On the other hand, other people think that getting experience and developing soft skills is more important.
Discuss both sides and give your opinion.
It is thought by some that the most effective method to secure a good job is taking and finishing university education, while others say that earning experience and building soft skills are more valuable. In my opinion, I believe that both of these ways are useful.
On the one hand, there are two reason why people continue to university for gaining a good career. Firstly, people gain skills to face the global competition. Universities teach them various courses that is needed by the companies and could not always be found on the internet especially law, medicine, or teaching. Secondly, university education is the main requirement to get a better job. Mostly, the industries prefer to recruit people who have an academic certificate of bachelor degree instead of people who do not have them. Because, they believe that the university has prepared the students to be professionals by teaching many studies that is required by the corporates as mentioned in the first point.
On the other hand, having good soft skills is important for two reasons. To begin with, it is more preferred by recruiters. Even though it is not the primary demand, yet soft skill namely communication or organization experience is more considered. Furthermore, people would work with the others in the industries, and capable in conversation could determine the success of the projects. The next one, people could pass the interview or forum discussion group easily. To illustrate, some people who have excellent hard skills fail in these steps, and it is caused by their lack of speaking capability.
All in all, I think in gaining a job people should own hard skills to be an expert which can be obtained from university education and soft skills in attracting the corporates to be more convinced to apply them. Also, universities need to provide some places for students for developing soft skills.
Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, first, firstly, furthermore, if, second, secondly, so, while, i think, in my opinion, to begin with, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 18.0 13.1623246493 137% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 7.0 7.85571142285 89% => OK
Conjunction : 10.0 10.4138276553 96% => OK
Relative clauses : 10.0 7.30460921844 137% => OK
Pronoun: 20.0 24.0651302605 83% => OK
Preposition: 37.0 41.998997996 88% => OK
Nominalization: 10.0 8.3376753507 120% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1583.0 1615.20841683 98% => OK
No of words: 312.0 315.596192385 99% => OK
Chars per words: 5.07371794872 5.12529762239 99% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.20279927342 4.20363070211 100% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.82204030608 2.80592935109 101% => OK
Unique words: 177.0 176.041082164 101% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.567307692308 0.561755894193 101% => OK
syllable_count: 495.9 506.74238477 98% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 5.43587174349 92% => OK
Interrogative: 0.0 0.384769539078 0% => OK
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 4.0 0.809619238477 494% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 5.0 4.76152304609 105% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 16.0 16.0721442886 100% => OK
Sentence length: 19.0 20.2975951904 94% => OK
Sentence length SD: 50.4467153911 49.4020404114 102% => OK
Chars per sentence: 98.9375 106.682146367 93% => OK
Words per sentence: 19.5 20.7667163134 94% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.75 7.06120827912 110% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 5.01903807615 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 11.0 8.67935871743 127% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 3.9879759519 25% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 3.4128256513 117% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.390731230701 0.244688304435 160% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.110402544928 0.084324248473 131% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0675335676017 0.0667982634062 101% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.230030516438 0.151304729494 152% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0456210503957 0.056905535591 80% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.2 13.0946893788 93% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 52.19 50.2224549098 104% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.7 11.3001002004 95% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.13 12.4159519038 98% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.73 8.58950901804 102% => OK
difficult_words: 82.0 78.4519038076 105% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.5 9.78957915832 117% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.6 10.1190380762 95% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.7795591182 111% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 84.2696629213 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.5 Out of 9
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