Computers are becoming an essential part of school lessons. Discuss the advantages and disadvantages and give your own opinion.
Nowadays, technology are developed in every fields like commercial, aviation,.. and computers becomes an important part of education programs. I think computers will give benifits but it is not false to say computers also give some disadvantages and this essay will discuss both of views and give my opinion.
On the good side, computers help students can be supported by a high-tech method in study. They can search information from the internet to find different ways to deal homework or prepare for next lecture to have a great lesson in school. To illustrate the point, students can learn on some Youtube channels like Ted-education or 8IELTS to learn new knowledge. As a result, students have a good background knowledge outside in school and they will have more study opportunity in the future if they have a various lore.
In cons, computers make students are distracted in study and stagnate their learning. Schoolars have computers, mobile phone or even modern laptop to support their study but they do not, they spend their methods to play games, watch movie or even online dating messages. As a case in point, parent bought a laptop for their child to study but their child did not study, he play games every day and even truant to spend time to combat in that game. Finally, his body is worn out because staying up at night, learning results are reduced...
In my opinion, computers give both advantages and disavantages and I balance about this issue that computers help students search information from the internet and computers also make schoolars distracted.
To summarize, computer is a hi-tech equipment and it helps students a lot in study but it also give some disavantages.
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...lps students a lot in study but it also give some disavantages.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, finally, if, so, i think, as a result, in my opinion
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 7.0 13.1623246493 53% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 6.0 7.85571142285 76% => OK
Conjunction : 18.0 10.4138276553 173% => OK
Relative clauses : 2.0 7.30460921844 27% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 23.0 24.0651302605 96% => OK
Preposition: 37.0 41.998997996 88% => OK
Nominalization: 6.0 8.3376753507 72% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1416.0 1615.20841683 88% => OK
No of words: 284.0 315.596192385 90% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.98591549296 5.12529762239 97% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.10515524023 4.20363070211 98% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.71374498121 2.80592935109 97% => OK
Unique words: 162.0 176.041082164 92% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.570422535211 0.561755894193 102% => OK
syllable_count: 441.9 506.74238477 87% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 5.43587174349 92% => OK
Article: 0.0 2.52805611222 0% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 4.76152304609 105% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 16.0721442886 81% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 21.0 20.2975951904 103% => OK
Sentence length SD: 44.3462705983 49.4020404114 90% => OK
Chars per sentence: 108.923076923 106.682146367 102% => OK
Words per sentence: 21.8461538462 20.7667163134 105% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.84615384615 7.06120827912 69% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.38176352705 114% => OK
Language errors: 7.0 5.01903807615 139% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 8.67935871743 104% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 3.9879759519 100% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 3.4128256513 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.204439571491 0.244688304435 84% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0732851681545 0.084324248473 87% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0913136461914 0.0667982634062 137% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.128839960724 0.151304729494 85% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.106368063921 0.056905535591 187% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.0 13.0946893788 99% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 50.16 50.2224549098 100% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.5 11.3001002004 102% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.66 12.4159519038 94% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.29 8.58950901804 97% => OK
difficult_words: 65.0 78.4519038076 83% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 9.78957915832 82% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.4 10.1190380762 103% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.7795591182 111% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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