Consumer goods have become the most important part of people 's live.Do the advantages outweigh the disadvantage?

Grammar and spelling errors:
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...onsumer have plenty merits and demerits.There are strong opinion consumer plays a vit...
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...nsumer plays a vital role in whole life.There are plethora reasons behind for this.Th...
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...re are plethora reasons behind for this.This essay would throw some light an all the...
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...sue and multiheads.The most predominant a couple of week everyone has liking whole consumer prod...
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...tiheads.The most predominant a couple of week everyone has liking whole consumer ...
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...yone has liking whole consumer products.For instance, gadgets device, make kit, adv...
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...adventures, clothes and new trend so on.Therfore, some dozen consider that consumer has...
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...d of new thing relate all nations round.Afterever, that why youngster might like consumer...
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...ght like consumering it. Nevertheless,there are no denying that fact the,in my poi...
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...umering it. Nevertheless,there are no denying that fact the,in my point of vie...
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...theless,there are no denying that fact the,in my point of view there are manifold d...
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...less,there are no denying that fact the,in my point of view there are manifold dra...
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...or consumer regarding to health problem.Further more,sometimes off spring has could not...
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...regarding to health problem.Further more,sometimes off spring has could not knowledge rela...
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... could not knowledge relate to any food.Otherwise, they have only watching any adventure...
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... relate to any food.Otherwise, they have only watching any adventures as far as t...
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...y watching any adventures as far as they would order that time than they will be ...
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...hey will be dangerous for health because sometimes people must not consciousness ...
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... sometimes people must not consciousness about things.For example,There should...
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...mes people must not consciousness about things.For example,There should causin...
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...e must not consciousness about things.For example,There should causing umpteen ...
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...consciousness about things.For example,There should causing umpteen disease.last b...
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...ousness about things.For example,There should causing umpteen disease.last but ...
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...een disease.last but not least, cardiac,blood pressure, heart, anxiety,depression ext...
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...y,depression extra. All said and done,I reckon on one hand it is true that con...
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...ion extra. All said and done,I reckon on one hand it is true that consumer is ...
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...consumer is very essential part of life all in all in my mind but also has use cosumering ple...
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... all informing rather than any products.On other hand, most of time people using c...
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...d so they shall be dangerous for health.Thus, consumer pros and cons.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, if, nevertheless, regarding, so, thus, well, for example, for instance, i reckon, no doubt, as well as, it is true

Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments

Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 11.0 13.1623246493 84% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 10.0 7.85571142285 127% => OK
Conjunction : 9.0 10.4138276553 86% => OK
Relative clauses : 6.0 7.30460921844 82% => OK
Pronoun: 20.0 24.0651302605 83% => OK
Preposition: 27.0 41.998997996 64% => OK
Nominalization: 1.0 8.3376753507 12% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.

Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1393.0 1615.20841683 86% => OK
No of words: 260.0 315.596192385 82% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.35769230769 5.12529762239 105% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.01553427287 4.20363070211 96% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.17887582005 2.80592935109 113% => OK
Unique words: 173.0 176.041082164 98% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.665384615385 0.561755894193 118% => OK
syllable_count: 417.6 506.74238477 82% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK

A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 5.43587174349 92% => OK
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 2.10420841683 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 4.76152304609 42% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.

Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 4.0 16.0721442886 25% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 65.0 20.2975951904 320% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 85.2408352845 49.4020404114 173% => OK
Chars per sentence: 348.25 106.682146367 326% => Less chars_per_sentence wanted.
Words per sentence: 65.0 20.7667163134 313% => Less words per sentence wanted.
Discourse Markers: 31.25 7.06120827912 443% => Less transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 6.0 4.38176352705 137% => Less paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 31.0 5.01903807615 618% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 3.0 8.67935871743 35% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 3.9879759519 25% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 3.4128256513 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?

Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.120930887358 0.244688304435 49% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0751266107432 0.084324248473 89% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0221579715737 0.0667982634062 33% => Sentences are similar to each other.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0562426248095 0.151304729494 37% => Maybe some paragraphs are off the topic.
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0327144650763 0.056905535591 57% => OK

Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 36.3 13.0946893788 277% => Automated_readability_index is high.
flesch_reading_ease: 5.5 50.2224549098 11% => Flesch_reading_ease is low.
smog_index: 14.6 7.44779559118 196% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 28.6 11.3001002004 253% => Flesch kincaid grade is high.
coleman_liau_index: 14.7 12.4159519038 118% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 10.75 8.58950901804 125% => OK
difficult_words: 64.0 78.4519038076 82% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 27.5 9.78957915832 281% => Linsear_write_formula is high.
gunning_fog: 28.0 10.1190380762 277% => Gunning_fog is high.
text_standard: 28.0 10.7795591182 260% => The average readability is very high. Good job!
What are above readability scores?

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Maximum five paragraphs wanted.

Rates: 67.4157303371 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.0 Out of 9
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