Consumers are faced with increasing number of advertisements from competing companies. To what extent do you think consumers are influenced by advertisements? What measures can be taken to protect them
Nowaday, to gain a competitive edge, companies have intention to invest more money on advertisement campaigns. This affects significantly on consumers in making decisions about what they buy for daily life. This essay will discuss about the influences of advertisements on customers and give some solutions to protect them from an increase in total of advertisements.
To begin with, the habit of buying products of consumers are impacted by communication such as via internet. For example, when customers read some good reviews about a product, they will increase truth on the quality of good and choose to buy it. In addition. to enhance their public image, enterprises usually make the most of product's features on the advertisement programs to appeal more customers to purchase items. Therefore, an attractive advertisement can change the option of customers in deciding what they buy.
However, an increase in the bunch of advertisements which are out of controlled has negative influences on customers, hence, some measures should implemented to protect customers from this issue. Firstly, the governments ought to enact some strict rules to business about advertisements. For instance, the authorities should take action on controlling the content of advertisements by examining and approving carefully before launching them to customers to ensure the information on advertisements are exact. Besides, countries can run some campaigns to evaluate the standard of products in order to make sure that the products are good for habitants' health.
In conclusion, it is clearly seen that advertisements made a great impact on customers, at least because people would purchase items are advertised on Television or endorsed by famous people. Nevertheless, some solutions should be carried out to protect consumers from illegal advertisements.
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 251, Rule ID: SENT_START_CONJUNCTIVE_LINKING_ADVERB_COMMA[2]
Message: Did you forget a comma after a conjunctive/linking adverb?
Suggestion: addition,
...uality of good and choose to buy it. In addition. to enhance their public image, enterpr...
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Line 3, column 261, Rule ID: UPPERCASE_SENTENCE_START
Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: To
...good and choose to buy it. In addition. to enhance their public image, enterprises...
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Line 3, column 321, Rule ID: MOST_SOME_OF_NNS[1]
Message: After 'most of', you should use 'the' ('most of the products') or simply say ''most products''.
Suggestion: most of the products; most products
...lic image, enterprises usually make the most of products features on the advertisement programs ...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
besides, first, firstly, hence, however, if, nevertheless, so, therefore, at least, for example, for instance, in addition, in conclusion, such as, to begin with
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 7.0 13.1623246493 53% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 9.0 7.85571142285 115% => OK
Conjunction : 4.0 10.4138276553 38% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 4.0 7.30460921844 55% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 13.0 24.0651302605 54% => OK
Preposition: 58.0 41.998997996 138% => OK
Nominalization: 9.0 8.3376753507 108% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1572.0 1615.20841683 97% => OK
No of words: 281.0 315.596192385 89% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.59430604982 5.12529762239 109% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.09427095027 4.20363070211 97% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.2518824438 2.80592935109 116% => OK
Unique words: 161.0 176.041082164 91% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.572953736655 0.561755894193 102% => OK
syllable_count: 494.1 506.74238477 98% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.8 1.60771543086 112% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 5.43587174349 74% => OK
Interrogative: 1.0 0.384769539078 260% => OK
Article: 5.0 2.52805611222 198% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 6.0 4.76152304609 126% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 16.0721442886 81% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 21.0 20.2975951904 103% => OK
Sentence length SD: 51.7876846916 49.4020404114 105% => OK
Chars per sentence: 120.923076923 106.682146367 113% => OK
Words per sentence: 21.6153846154 20.7667163134 104% => OK
Discourse Markers: 12.3846153846 7.06120827912 175% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 5.01903807615 60% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 8.67935871743 92% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 3.9879759519 25% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 5.0 3.4128256513 147% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.257737252223 0.244688304435 105% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.085832870005 0.084324248473 102% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0607517785441 0.0667982634062 91% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.165016425525 0.151304729494 109% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0313484177764 0.056905535591 55% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 15.7 13.0946893788 120% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 33.24 50.2224549098 66% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 13.8 11.3001002004 122% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 15.14 12.4159519038 122% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.29 8.58950901804 108% => OK
difficult_words: 82.0 78.4519038076 105% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 9.78957915832 112% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.4 10.1190380762 103% => OK
text_standard: 16.0 10.7795591182 148% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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