Convenience foods will become increasingly prevalent and eventually replace traditional foods and traditional methods of food preparation.
TO what extent do you agree or disagree with this opinion?
Give reasons for your answer and include any relevant examples from your own knowledge.
Nowadays, fast food has become an essential part of people's lives. Therefore, some individuals believe that the increasing prevalence of such food is likely to eradicate traditional cuisine and methods of cooking. Personally, I completely disprove this notion when considering local health and countries' traditions
Although fast food contains lots of calories to consumers, it brings dire harm to people's health in an unpreventable way. Indeed, fat and a high amount of gluten in that food can enhance the chance of being overweight in which eventually leads to the overall unhealthy well-being of users. According to many recent surveys, six in every ten people have to suffer from type 2 diabetes and heart-related illnesses because of the regular intake of this type of produce. This is one of the reasons why I think convenient food cannot be a possible substitute for the traditional ones.
Moreover, traditional cuisines still of magnitude as it represents a nation's cultural values. In other words, in festivals and special occasions like a wedding or funeral, the presence of such valuable traditional dishes is mandatory. In the Tet festival in VietNam, Banh Chung, and boiled chicken symbolize Vietnamese history and fortune in every single household. In addition, the process of preparing and making Banh Chung is one of the most exciting activities for children during this festival, and this can be a good opportunity for family gatherings as well.
In conclusion, despite the predominance of fast food, I still ascertain that such food cannot replace traditional cuisine and preparation. It is hard to visualize a country without cultural cuisines
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
moreover, so, still, therefore, well, i think, in addition, in conclusion, in other words
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 9.0 13.1623246493 68% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 4.0 7.85571142285 51% => OK
Conjunction : 11.0 10.4138276553 106% => OK
Relative clauses : 5.0 7.30460921844 68% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 14.0 24.0651302605 58% => OK
Preposition: 40.0 41.998997996 95% => OK
Nominalization: 6.0 8.3376753507 72% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1407.0 1615.20841683 87% => OK
No of words: 263.0 315.596192385 83% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.34980988593 5.12529762239 104% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.02706775958 4.20363070211 96% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.97929066256 2.80592935109 106% => OK
Unique words: 164.0 176.041082164 93% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.623574144487 0.561755894193 111% => OK
syllable_count: 444.6 506.74238477 88% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 5.43587174349 92% => OK
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 2.10420841683 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 2.0 0.809619238477 247% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 7.0 4.76152304609 147% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 12.0 16.0721442886 75% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 21.0 20.2975951904 103% => OK
Sentence length SD: 52.4374627533 49.4020404114 106% => OK
Chars per sentence: 117.25 106.682146367 110% => OK
Words per sentence: 21.9166666667 20.7667163134 106% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.41666666667 7.06120827912 105% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 8.0 5.01903807615 159% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 4.0 8.67935871743 46% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 3.9879759519 100% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 3.4128256513 117% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.279286353049 0.244688304435 114% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.097935917415 0.084324248473 116% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0818030747791 0.0667982634062 122% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.170195594734 0.151304729494 112% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0530718410923 0.056905535591 93% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.7 13.0946893788 112% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 41.7 50.2224549098 83% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 12.7 11.3001002004 112% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.75 12.4159519038 111% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.6 8.58950901804 112% => OK
difficult_words: 82.0 78.4519038076 105% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.5 9.78957915832 117% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.4 10.1190380762 103% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 10.7795591182 93% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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