Countries are becoming more and more similar because people are able to buy the same products anywhere in the world. Do you think this is a positive or negative development?
Nowadays, there are an increase number of similarities among countries since the trade in global reach. Personally, i tend to suppose that this is a positive development, as will now be argued.
On the one hand, there are several drawbacks is blaimed for globalization. The significant curtail in domestic consumption index is believed to be one of the most noticeable issues. In the other words, most inhabitants have a tendency to appreciate imported goods compared to domestic ones; therefore, they would purchase foreign labelled items. For instance, in Vietnam, people prefer using the functional foods such as omega or vitamin originated in the USA than similar domestic products due to by fact that those imported from the USA are always evaluated with much higher quality and reputation. This may exert not only a deteriorate impact on the financial situation in lots of corporations, even being suffer from bankrupt risks but also some of following consequences namely unemployment or poverty. Furthermore, the governments and individuals are likely to struggle with mantaining the national culture and diversity of conventional values whille numerous brands and plants are flooding into abroad markets, which leads the domestic products to be gradually replaced in the consumption market.
On the other hand, despite above disadvantages, i still side those who believe that the globalized advancement is likely to be an advantageous one. It is attributed to a number of potential factors. Firstly, the shopping scope is widen to global network analog with the past. By the same token, the imported goods contribute to the various launches of products, which provides customers and end- users with multiple choices. To illustrate, in Vietnam, as regards the fashion industry, if there were no integration into the international market, the Vietnamese would hardly have opportunities to access branded items from local segment to luxurious or high-end one such as Chanel, Gucci, Zara and so on; as a result, this change also help many fashion icons and trendsetters are able to keep up with the latest trend much more easily in comparison with those in former generations. This is compounded by the flooding of in-door products into oversea nations to meet the demand of individuals currently settling down and living in those countries, particularly in the superpowers and developed ones with few barriers. Finally, the global climate namely corporate globalization and multinational enterprises appreance seems to generate a healthy and fair competitive environment among organizations, which nugdes CEOs and managers as well to plan extreme strategies in the harsh competitiveness. As a result, it plays a fundamental role in boosting the sustainable GDP's increase as well as encouraging breakthrough business ideas greatly appreciated in the intense competitive economic market.
In conclusion, for the aforementioned reasons, i believe that the global revolution is an essential progression in general to make the globe become a superior place for mankind
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, finally, first, firstly, furthermore, if, may, so, still, therefore, well, as regards, for instance, in conclusion, in general, such as, as a result, as well as, by the same token, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 20.0 13.1623246493 152% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 4.0 7.85571142285 51% => OK
Conjunction : 16.0 10.4138276553 154% => OK
Relative clauses : 8.0 7.30460921844 110% => OK
Pronoun: 18.0 24.0651302605 75% => OK
Preposition: 74.0 41.998997996 176% => OK
Nominalization: 15.0 8.3376753507 180% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2597.0 1615.20841683 161% => OK
No of words: 475.0 315.596192385 151% => Less content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.46736842105 5.12529762239 107% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.66845742379 4.20363070211 111% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.13411679563 2.80592935109 112% => OK
Unique words: 284.0 176.041082164 161% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.597894736842 0.561755894193 106% => OK
syllable_count: 835.2 506.74238477 165% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.8 1.60771543086 112% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 9.0 5.43587174349 166% => OK
Article: 6.0 2.52805611222 237% => Less articles wanted as sentence beginning.
Subordination: 5.0 2.10420841683 238% => Less adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 9.0 4.76152304609 189% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 17.0 16.0721442886 106% => OK
Sentence length: 27.0 20.2975951904 133% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 99.5495390579 49.4020404114 202% => The lengths of sentences changed so frequently.
Chars per sentence: 152.764705882 106.682146367 143% => OK
Words per sentence: 27.9411764706 20.7667163134 135% => OK
Discourse Markers: 12.2941176471 7.06120827912 174% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 4.0 5.01903807615 80% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 13.0 8.67935871743 150% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.9879759519 50% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.4128256513 59% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.0978571628678 0.244688304435 40% => The similarity between the topic and the content is low.
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0254007313271 0.084324248473 30% => Sentence topic similarity is low.
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0287631899061 0.0667982634062 43% => Sentences are similar to each other.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.059586654983 0.151304729494 39% => Maybe some paragraphs are off the topic.
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0290295798453 0.056905535591 51% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 18.3 13.0946893788 140% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 27.15 50.2224549098 54% => Flesch_reading_ease is low.
smog_index: 11.2 7.44779559118 150% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 16.2 11.3001002004 143% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 14.74 12.4159519038 119% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 10.66 8.58950901804 124% => OK
difficult_words: 171.0 78.4519038076 218% => Less difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 8.5 9.78957915832 87% => OK
gunning_fog: 12.8 10.1190380762 126% => OK
text_standard: 13.0 10.7795591182 121% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 89.8876404494 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 8.0 Out of 9
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