Countries are becoming more and more similar because people are able to buy the same products anywhere in the world.Do you think this is a positive or negative development?
It is true that people are becoming more fashionable in modern time and follow various types of contemporary brands, which are quite famous not only in their country but also throughout the world.While I understand that critics may see this is an invasion of the society.I would argue that there are far more benefits.
The main drawback of the trend towards same clothing anywhere is that it vividly affects in clothing to buy the traditional one.In general, in modern era, people are very influence to wear modern brands,which are quite famous throughout the world, because they want to keep pace with the contemporary fashion.Furthermore, by compassing traditional market,it becomes instability in the shop owner, owing to this is not worthwhile for individual people to equipped with clothing in the shop in international one.Apart from this, it affects to earn revenue in any state,which known as GDP that is mainly depending on the traditional business in the globe .Hence,global market not only dispel the whole economy but also far away from the own traditional norms.The most valuable thing is that all are not capable to buy international clothes, because it has a lot of price, which is not affordable,in essence,for the poor people in the society.If any people work as a Clark, for example,to maintain contemporary fashion is a day-dream for them.
Despite the negatives mentioned above.I believe that to have modern fashion is some positive development for various reasons. Firstly,there are no hindrance among the countries throughout the world.All walk of people can together a specific place, where do not have any discrimination among the citizen.In addition to this,it makes a overwhelm relationship in all nation,therefore, it may open the door for underdeveloped and developing countries people to work or study in the booming one.By throwing international events, all country can show their fashion and beauty that attract a lot of spectator and make an awareness to build up bilateral relationship,which increase economic growth as well as diversity relationship among the countries. China ,for instance, organize a beauty fashion in every year, which can participate in all country and can conquer the highest prize that make a person as a role model of fashion designer.In other words, all people are not capable to go in abroad in order to buy clothes in international centre. Last but not least, diversity is the beauty in any country, which attract lots of visitor to go in enjoying their cultural activities.
In conclusion, while I recognize the possible disadvantages of similar fashion. I consider it to be a positive development overall.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, firstly, furthermore, hence, if, may, so, therefore, well, while, apart from, for example, for instance, in addition, in conclusion, in general, as well as, in other words, it is true
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 19.0 13.1623246493 144% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 7.0 7.85571142285 89% => OK
Conjunction : 9.0 10.4138276553 86% => OK
Relative clauses : 17.0 7.30460921844 233% => Less relative clauses wanted (maybe 'which' is over used).
Pronoun: 31.0 24.0651302605 129% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 65.0 41.998997996 155% => OK
Nominalization: 8.0 8.3376753507 96% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2258.0 1615.20841683 140% => OK
No of words: 427.0 315.596192385 135% => OK
Chars per words: 5.28805620609 5.12529762239 103% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.54576487731 4.20363070211 108% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.20610524439 2.80592935109 114% => OK
Unique words: 225.0 176.041082164 128% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.526932084309 0.561755894193 94% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 716.4 506.74238477 141% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 8.0 5.43587174349 147% => OK
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 5.0 2.10420841683 238% => Less adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 12.0 4.76152304609 252% => Less preposition wanted as sentence beginnings.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 8.0 16.0721442886 50% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 53.0 20.2975951904 261% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 317.881635794 49.4020404114 643% => The lengths of sentences changed so frequently.
Chars per sentence: 282.25 106.682146367 265% => Less chars_per_sentence wanted.
Words per sentence: 53.375 20.7667163134 257% => Less words per sentence wanted.
Discourse Markers: 25.125 7.06120827912 356% => Less transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 35.0 5.01903807615 697% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 5.0 8.67935871743 58% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 3.9879759519 75% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 3.4128256513 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.218139832054 0.244688304435 89% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0903035422154 0.084324248473 107% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0544002421155 0.0667982634062 81% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.133816090694 0.151304729494 88% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0335404776163 0.056905535591 59% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 30.2 13.0946893788 231% => Automated_readability_index is high.
flesch_reading_ease: 9.22 50.2224549098 18% => Flesch_reading_ease is low.
smog_index: 15.9 7.44779559118 213% => Smog_index is high.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 25.1 11.3001002004 222% => Flesch kincaid grade is high.
coleman_liau_index: 14.29 12.4159519038 115% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 10.07 8.58950901804 117% => OK
difficult_words: 103.0 78.4519038076 131% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 27.0 9.78957915832 276% => Linsear_write_formula is high.
gunning_fog: 23.2 10.1190380762 229% => Gunning_fog is high.
text_standard: 27.0 10.7795591182 250% => The average readability is very high. Good job!
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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