As countries develop, more and more people buy and use their cars.
Do you think the advantages of this trend for individuals outweigh the disadvantages for the society?
In this day and age, a large number of automobiles are increasingly manufactured and used since the general development of most nations reached a high level. While it is said by some that this trend could exert consequences, I totally believe the benefits would dominate the drawbacks.
People fear certain minus points from the enormous use of cars. For starters, air pollution is something inevitable. The more cars travelled in the streets, the more amount of harmful gases released into the atmosphere, which impacts the respiratory system of humans. Lung cancer and asthma are common diseases citizens have in municipal areas. Another form of pollution is noise pollution. It is undoubtedly recognized that if a location is heavily traversed by cars, its residents usually get irritated and have irregular patterns of sleep more than the place which is not. So, people claiming the automobiles are contributing factors causing bad results might have the point.
Having said that, I hold a strong belief that the upsides would outweigh the downsides. First and foremost, it is far more convenient when people use cars. No matter how much toxic fumes are emitted into the air, we cannot deny comfortable feelings if transported by cars, especially under bad weather conditions. Besides, pets could be accommodated with their owners, which is not allowed when they take modes of public transportation. Secondly, a good image of a society could be created when a lots of cars travel on roads. It means that the quantity of cars reflects the wealth of civilians. In contrast, a community full of motorbikes are not often appreciated by the observers as it is still a developing one. Lastly, automobile development would constitute a huge proportion in the total economy. The fact that cars are sold on a regular basis indicates the thriving percentage in this industry, making the overall economic status higher, so it definitely is a good sign for society.
In summary, people have a preference for purchasing and using their personal cars, and I think this trend would yield more good results than the bad ones.
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 22, Rule ID: LARGE_NUMBER_OF[1]
Message: Specify a number, remove phrase, or simply use 'many' or 'numerous'
Suggestion: many; numerous
In this day and age, a large number of automobiles are increasingly manufactur...
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Line 3, column 495, Rule ID: A_PLURAL[1]
Message: Don't use indefinite articles with plural words. Did you mean 'a lot' or simply 'lots'?
Suggestion: a lot; lots
...mage of a society could be created when a lots of cars travel on roads. It means that ...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
besides, but, first, if, lastly, second, secondly, so, still, while, i think, in contrast, in summary
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 18.0 13.1623246493 137% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 9.0 7.85571142285 115% => OK
Conjunction : 7.0 10.4138276553 67% => OK
Relative clauses : 12.0 7.30460921844 164% => OK
Pronoun: 24.0 24.0651302605 100% => OK
Preposition: 32.0 41.998997996 76% => OK
Nominalization: 9.0 8.3376753507 108% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1772.0 1615.20841683 110% => OK
No of words: 347.0 315.596192385 110% => OK
Chars per words: 5.10662824207 5.12529762239 100% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.31600926901 4.20363070211 103% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.82055872042 2.80592935109 101% => OK
Unique words: 213.0 176.041082164 121% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.613832853026 0.561755894193 109% => OK
syllable_count: 562.5 506.74238477 111% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 7.0 5.43587174349 129% => OK
Article: 6.0 2.52805611222 237% => Less articles wanted as sentence beginning.
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 4.76152304609 63% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 19.0 16.0721442886 118% => OK
Sentence length: 18.0 20.2975951904 89% => OK
Sentence length SD: 43.4376682723 49.4020404114 88% => OK
Chars per sentence: 93.2631578947 106.682146367 87% => OK
Words per sentence: 18.2631578947 20.7667163134 88% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.31578947368 7.06120827912 75% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 5.01903807615 40% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 8.67935871743 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 7.0 3.9879759519 176% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 5.0 3.4128256513 147% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.272182629385 0.244688304435 111% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0678612717844 0.084324248473 80% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0666022377628 0.0667982634062 100% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.172938429164 0.151304729494 114% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0707360382356 0.056905535591 124% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.8 13.0946893788 90% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 53.21 50.2224549098 106% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.3 11.3001002004 91% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.36 12.4159519038 100% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.63 8.58950901804 112% => OK
difficult_words: 112.0 78.4519038076 143% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.5 9.78957915832 87% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.2 10.1190380762 91% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 10.7795591182 93% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 84.2696629213 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.5 Out of 9
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