Countries with a long average working time are more economically successful than those countries which do not have a long working time. To what extent do you agree or disagree?
The importance of working duration has raised much concern from the public. Some people claim that in order for a country to develop in terms of its economy, the average working hours should be extended to generate more productivity. However, to my way of thinking, I strongly oppose this view and believe that suitable periods spent for work could be adjustable.
On the one hand, employees are more likely to be more prone to illness either physically and mentally if they stay at work for prolonged hours. Symptoms such as lower back pain or headaches are reported by many workers, especially those in technology industry, when they work overtime. Moreover, due to the immense workload they have to handle every day, their mental health has to suffer negatively and might lead to more serious disorders. Lacking a sense of fulfillment and satisfaction, for example, is considered as one of the most common consequences people encounter when working longer time. This, indeed, will affect the national economy in the long run as a result of labor shortage.
On the other hand, with the advancement of modern technology nowadays, people can work remotely outside their office, giving their working hours more flexibility. Some jobs, freelancer in particular, allow employees to work online from home whenever they want as long as they can fulfill their tasks in prior to the due day. This way, they are given more freedom to work and relax interchangeably more than ten hours per day. According to experts, the more joyful the workers are, the more energy and productivity they can generate, thus making the business more prosperous and ultimately contributing to fostering the economy. In addition, online working can even attract extra foreign investment and develop global trade between different countries.
In conclusion, despite some minor influences when employees work overtime, I strongly favor the idea of working longer hours remotely to reach one's fullest potentials and make the national economy more successful.
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 7, column 144, Rule ID: THE_SUPERLATIVE[2]
Message: A determiner is probably missing here: 'ones the fullest'.
Suggestion: ones the fullest
... working longer hours remotely to reach ones fullest potentials and make the national econom...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, however, if, moreover, so, thus, as to, for example, in addition, in conclusion, in particular, such as, as a result, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 8.0 13.1623246493 61% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 8.0 7.85571142285 102% => OK
Conjunction : 10.0 10.4138276553 96% => OK
Relative clauses : 5.0 7.30460921844 68% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 20.0 24.0651302605 83% => OK
Preposition: 41.0 41.998997996 98% => OK
Nominalization: 7.0 8.3376753507 84% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1712.0 1615.20841683 106% => OK
No of words: 326.0 315.596192385 103% => OK
Chars per words: 5.25153374233 5.12529762239 102% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.24917287072 4.20363070211 101% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.71318975054 2.80592935109 97% => OK
Unique words: 197.0 176.041082164 112% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.604294478528 0.561755894193 108% => OK
syllable_count: 539.1 506.74238477 106% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 5.43587174349 92% => OK
Article: 4.0 2.52805611222 158% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 8.0 4.76152304609 168% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 14.0 16.0721442886 87% => OK
Sentence length: 23.0 20.2975951904 113% => OK
Sentence length SD: 36.8911802966 49.4020404114 75% => OK
Chars per sentence: 122.285714286 106.682146367 115% => OK
Words per sentence: 23.2857142857 20.7667163134 112% => OK
Discourse Markers: 10.0 7.06120827912 142% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.01903807615 20% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 10.0 8.67935871743 115% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 3.9879759519 75% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.22721491569 0.244688304435 93% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0783328917136 0.084324248473 93% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0294374785709 0.0667982634062 44% => Sentences are similar to each other.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.132779344451 0.151304729494 88% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0252170966605 0.056905535591 44% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.9 13.0946893788 114% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 39.67 50.2224549098 79% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 13.4 11.3001002004 119% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.47 12.4159519038 108% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.33 8.58950901804 109% => OK
difficult_words: 94.0 78.4519038076 120% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 9.78957915832 112% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.2 10.1190380762 111% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 10.7795591182 102% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 84.2696629213 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.5 Out of 9
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