Creativity is the key to problem solving. To what extent do you agree with this statement? Give reason to support your answer
It is said that the time of technological revolution 4.0 required a rage of different skills to obtain the successes in the working environment. In my view, I believe strongly that creativity can be seen as one of the most important skills that almost employees need to possess to apply in solving the problems in the practical situations.
Looking at the biological and physiological aspects, having a creativity will enable staff work more effectively with regard to the increasingly profit in many businesses. This was proven through the trustworthy statistics that was issued in a variety of scientific publications posted on the reputed journals. In the fact, the brain of people is divided into two hemispheres, including left and right-part. The left-brain has the function in helping people to solve the numeracy problems or analysis the data in the quantity tests in a large number of scientific researches, whereas the right-one participate in the activities relating to the Arts like drawing the graffiti or making the fresco. Some experts argued that applying creativity in the works will enhance the operation of both hemispheres, resulting in making the great accomplishments for the community.
On the other hand, we tend to keep our awareness that knowledge relating to sciences, mathematics, anthropology or engineering always be seen as the most necessary in contribution to the development of our world. Indeed, there is extremely difficult to imagine that how this planet was to be in case lacking these fields, leading to the far less progress in our social as we can witness today. However, approaching creatively might be expected to produce much more productivity, boosting the increase of global economic, which shown in the gross domestic product in a lot of nations. Beside this, a method of researching without creativity also be lead to nothing accomplishments as the mankind had obtained in the history. Take the case of Edison as a example for the great effect of creative thinking to innovate the facility for the world.
In general, creativity always plays a pivotal roles in the working environment. Consequently, the creative activities, such as music competition or Arts performances, should be encouraged among the students community when they are studying in the schools due to the fact that they are going to the positive citizen in the future
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, consequently, however, if, look, so, whereas, as to, in general, such as, in my view, with regard to, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 14.0 13.1623246493 106% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 7.0 7.85571142285 89% => OK
Conjunction : 6.0 10.4138276553 58% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 10.0 7.30460921844 137% => OK
Pronoun: 22.0 24.0651302605 91% => OK
Preposition: 63.0 41.998997996 150% => OK
Nominalization: 9.0 8.3376753507 108% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2016.0 1615.20841683 125% => OK
No of words: 384.0 315.596192385 122% => OK
Chars per words: 5.25 5.12529762239 102% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.4267276788 4.20363070211 105% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.0994616188 2.80592935109 110% => OK
Unique words: 224.0 176.041082164 127% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.583333333333 0.561755894193 104% => OK
syllable_count: 627.3 506.74238477 124% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 5.43587174349 74% => OK
Article: 4.0 2.52805611222 158% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 2.10420841683 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 4.76152304609 105% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 14.0 16.0721442886 87% => OK
Sentence length: 27.0 20.2975951904 133% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 54.8676050291 49.4020404114 111% => OK
Chars per sentence: 144.0 106.682146367 135% => OK
Words per sentence: 27.4285714286 20.7667163134 132% => OK
Discourse Markers: 9.28571428571 7.06120827912 132% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 6.0 5.01903807615 120% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 10.0 8.67935871743 115% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.9879759519 50% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.4128256513 59% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.106979040229 0.244688304435 44% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0344035764187 0.084324248473 41% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0248580194009 0.0667982634062 37% => Sentences are similar to each other.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0606535714898 0.151304729494 40% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0128536037006 0.056905535591 23% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 17.0 13.0946893788 130% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 44.07 50.2224549098 88% => OK
smog_index: 13.0 7.44779559118 175% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 13.8 11.3001002004 122% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.47 12.4159519038 108% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.99 8.58950901804 116% => OK
difficult_words: 122.0 78.4519038076 156% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 15.5 9.78957915832 158% => OK
gunning_fog: 12.8 10.1190380762 126% => OK
text_standard: 13.0 10.7795591182 121% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 84.2696629213 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.5 Out of 9
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