Crimes committed by young people are increasing in major cities throughout the world. Discuss the causes and how to solve this problem.
Criminal activities have risen dramatically among young offenders in many metropolitan cities all over the world. This situation stems from several reasons and should be addressed by some effective solutions.
There are two culprits of the crime rate of young criminals in the global context. Firstly, domestic violence happening throughout childhood has an adverse effect on the youngster. Because the minor may witness aggressive behaviours among their parents or even be a victim of child abuse which instils violent thoughts in their mind, they can take these actions to others again when they grow up. Secondly, due to the development of the internet and technology, many young people can access violent content which is not strictly controlled or examined. For example, the young generation can be addicted to violent games or thriller movies including many sexual assaults and homicides and then try to imitate these witnessed behaviours in the real life.
A number of measures should be adopted to mitigate the increasing number of juvenile delinquents. The primary solution is the cooperation between family and school in educating the young generation. Parents should set a good example for their children and prevent them from exposing toxic content on the Internet. Another notable measure to solve this problem is that the governments and local authorities should pass strict rules to tackle major crimes as a deterrent to the minor. For instance, in Vietnam, the national government has set tough legislation related to cyberspace, such as fining cyberbullies and deterring juvenile delinquents through community service.
In conclusion, there are several reasons leading to the growth of young offenders in many large cities and strong remedies should be taken to reduce this trend. It is predicted that unless these solutions are applied, the problems associated with young criminals will continue to rise significantly in the future.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
first, firstly, if, may, second, secondly, so, then, for example, for instance, in conclusion, such as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 12.0 13.1623246493 91% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 10.0 7.85571142285 127% => OK
Conjunction : 12.0 10.4138276553 115% => OK
Relative clauses : 5.0 7.30460921844 68% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 15.0 24.0651302605 62% => OK
Preposition: 41.0 41.998997996 98% => OK
Nominalization: 10.0 8.3376753507 120% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1657.0 1615.20841683 103% => OK
No of words: 303.0 315.596192385 96% => OK
Chars per words: 5.46864686469 5.12529762239 107% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.17215713816 4.20363070211 99% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.76841236176 2.80592935109 99% => OK
Unique words: 192.0 176.041082164 109% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.633663366337 0.561755894193 113% => OK
syllable_count: 508.5 506.74238477 100% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 5.43587174349 55% => OK
Article: 5.0 2.52805611222 198% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 4.76152304609 42% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 14.0 16.0721442886 87% => OK
Sentence length: 21.0 20.2975951904 103% => OK
Sentence length SD: 42.340215842 49.4020404114 86% => OK
Chars per sentence: 118.357142857 106.682146367 111% => OK
Words per sentence: 21.6428571429 20.7667163134 104% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.28571428571 7.06120827912 103% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 5.01903807615 60% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 5.0 8.67935871743 58% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 9.0 3.9879759519 226% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 3.4128256513 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.188333631323 0.244688304435 77% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.059891816627 0.084324248473 71% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0499600636241 0.0667982634062 75% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.107475842395 0.151304729494 71% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0177580768888 0.056905535591 31% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 15.2 13.0946893788 116% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 41.7 50.2224549098 83% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 12.7 11.3001002004 112% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 14.45 12.4159519038 116% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 10.31 8.58950901804 120% => OK
difficult_words: 108.0 78.4519038076 138% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 9.78957915832 82% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.4 10.1190380762 103% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 10.7795591182 102% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 84.2696629213 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.5 Out of 9
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