Crimes committed by young people are increasing in major cities throughout the world. Discuss the causes and how to solve this problem.
It is true that there are more and more juvenile delinquents in many parts of the world. There are some reasons for this trend, and it can also be tackled by taking various measures.
The global increase in youth crime can be possibly caused by two main factors. Firstly, the majority of children and teenagers nowadays have access to the Internet, so they are likely to be exposed to violent and sexual content. With the help of an Internet connection, young people can watch thrillers and horror films which contain bloody scenes, such as “The Shining” or “The Witch”, and this may encourage them to develop anti-social behaviour. Secondly, most parents in today’s society, especially those in metropolitans, have an increasingly hectic pace of life. Due to busy work schedules, they do not have a lot of time for their children, so they cannot be aware when their offspring get involved with gangs and start to commit petty crimes.
In order to address this issue, there is a range of actions can be taken. Schools and parents should join forces and try their best to educate young students to become decent and productive citizens in the future. Another solution would be for international governments to ban books, films and TV programmes with obscene language or other contents that are detrimental to the cognitive development and mental health of youngsters. Finally, there should be harsher punishments, like steeper fines or even imprisonment, for juvenile offenders.
In conclusion, there are two key factors leading to the rise in the number of young criminals all over the world, and this problem can be solved in at least three different ways.
Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, finally, first, firstly, if, may, second, secondly, so, at least, in conclusion, in fact, such as, it is true
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 15.0 13.1623246493 114% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 10.0 7.85571142285 127% => OK
Conjunction : 16.0 10.4138276553 154% => OK
Relative clauses : 4.0 7.30460921844 55% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 16.0 24.0651302605 66% => OK
Preposition: 37.0 41.998997996 88% => OK
Nominalization: 4.0 8.3376753507 48% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1400.0 1615.20841683 87% => OK
No of words: 277.0 315.596192385 88% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.05415162455 5.12529762239 99% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.07962216107 4.20363070211 97% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.69842012143 2.80592935109 96% => OK
Unique words: 179.0 176.041082164 102% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.646209386282 0.561755894193 115% => OK
syllable_count: 421.2 506.74238477 83% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 2.0 5.43587174349 37% => OK
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 2.10420841683 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 3.0 0.809619238477 371% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 4.0 4.76152304609 84% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 12.0 16.0721442886 75% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 23.0 20.2975951904 113% => OK
Sentence length SD: 50.825067634 49.4020404114 103% => OK
Chars per sentence: 116.666666667 106.682146367 109% => OK
Words per sentence: 23.0833333333 20.7667163134 111% => OK
Discourse Markers: 9.58333333333 7.06120827912 136% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 5.01903807615 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 3.0 8.67935871743 35% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 6.0 3.9879759519 150% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.4128256513 88% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.159936097868 0.244688304435 65% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0527225749001 0.084324248473 63% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0474788489147 0.0667982634062 71% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0939832071714 0.151304729494 62% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0511234913586 0.056905535591 90% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.9 13.0946893788 106% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 56.59 50.2224549098 113% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.1 11.3001002004 98% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.31 12.4159519038 99% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.51 8.58950901804 111% => OK
difficult_words: 83.0 78.4519038076 106% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 10.5 9.78957915832 107% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.2 10.1190380762 111% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 10.7795591182 102% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 89.8876404494 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 8.0 Out of 9
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