cycling is more environmentally friendly than other forms of transport. Why is it not popular in many places? And how to increase its popularity?
It is widely admitted that riding a bike is one of the most effective activities to protect the environment. There are a number of reasons behind this point of view and several solutions should be proposed to addressing the problem
There are two primary reasons for the uncommon use of bicycles. First of all, using a bike consumes much energy and time so people prefer using other types of vehicles such as motorbikes and cars which take less time and energy. For example, my close friend often goes to school by bicycle within fifteen minutes but if she drives a car it takes her only five minutes. Secondly, riding a bike is dangerous. There are many huge kinds of transport on the road but there are not any lanes for bikes. Therefore, this sometimes leads to traffic accidents. As a result, cycling is not the best choice for traveling in today's society
However, several measures must be taken by governments and international bodies to rise the popularity of bicycle. The first solution would be to limit the number of cars and motorbikes by increasing the price of petrol or raising the tax on these vehicles. Furthermore, more lanes should be built to serve only cyclists, which would make it much faster to travel by bicycles. The final solution is to propagandize in the media or newspapers about cycling's benefits such as to increase people's health and protect the environments. this could encourage people to cycle more often.
In conclusion, it is obvious that there are various reasons why the use of bicycles is not trendy in modern life, and necessary steps need to be taken to tackle this problem
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, first, furthermore, however, if, second, secondly, so, therefore, as to, for example, in conclusion, such as, as a result, first of all
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 17.0 13.1623246493 129% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 7.0 7.85571142285 89% => OK
Conjunction : 12.0 10.4138276553 115% => OK
Relative clauses : 4.0 7.30460921844 55% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 14.0 24.0651302605 58% => OK
Preposition: 37.0 41.998997996 88% => OK
Nominalization: 3.0 8.3376753507 36% => More nominalization wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1342.0 1615.20841683 83% => OK
No of words: 279.0 315.596192385 88% => OK
Chars per words: 4.81003584229 5.12529762239 94% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.08696624509 4.20363070211 97% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.59421957549 2.80592935109 92% => OK
Unique words: 163.0 176.041082164 93% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.584229390681 0.561755894193 104% => OK
syllable_count: 437.4 506.74238477 86% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 5.43587174349 92% => OK
Interrogative: 0.0 0.384769539078 0% => OK
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 1.0 4.76152304609 21% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 16.0721442886 81% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 21.0 20.2975951904 103% => OK
Sentence length SD: 51.0510824347 49.4020404114 103% => OK
Chars per sentence: 103.230769231 106.682146367 97% => OK
Words per sentence: 21.4615384615 20.7667163134 103% => OK
Discourse Markers: 10.7692307692 7.06120827912 153% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 5.01903807615 40% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 8.67935871743 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 5.0 3.9879759519 125% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.127114147677 0.244688304435 52% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0403702020308 0.084324248473 48% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0333167000377 0.0667982634062 50% => Sentences are similar to each other.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0601584925058 0.151304729494 40% => Maybe some paragraphs are off the topic.
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.038844139591 0.056905535591 68% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.0 13.0946893788 92% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 50.16 50.2224549098 100% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.5 11.3001002004 102% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.62 12.4159519038 86% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.98 8.58950901804 105% => OK
difficult_words: 76.0 78.4519038076 97% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 13.5 9.78957915832 138% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.4 10.1190380762 103% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.7795591182 111% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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