The dangers of smoking are well known, yet many people continue with this habit.
What are the causes of this? How can we reduce smoking in society?
Give reasons for your answer, and include any relevant examples from your own knowledge or experience.
It is said that smoking can lead to a variety of ongoing complications in the body, but many individuals still carried on indulging themselves in this problem. This essay will highlight several key reasons associated with the continuity of smoking as well as recommend some practical solutions to cope with this phenomenon.
To begin with, there are a variety of reasons why people are still using tobacco, despite its risks. Firstly, the tobacco industry’s ads, price breaks, and other promotions for its products have an adverse bearing on people's lives, especially the young, because these manners are a way for new users to learn how to inhale and become addicted to nicotine, which can prepare them for smoking. The younger people are when they begin to smoke, the more likely they are to be enslaved by tobacco. Secondly, if smokers suddenly cut down on or stop the number of cigarettes they use, they will go through the pain of withdrawal symptoms, which can lead to people start using tobacco again to boost blood levels of nicotine and avoid the pain. For example, tiredness, anxiety, and chest tightness would be experienced by tobacco users during the period of withdrawal symptoms.
Despite the aforementioned causes, some simple measures should be implemented to deal with the problem of the increased rate of smokers in society. The most prominent of which is bringing in the law to forbid advertisements for tobacco and prohibit cigar use at all levels of society in order to stop the influx of new smokers. Hence some strict punishments should be taken into consideration to apply to anyone that infringes the law. Additionally, another feasible solution can be that some practical exercise programs should be created by experts to reduce the nasty feeling of tobacco users during the rehabilitation period and to increase the overall awareness of the well-being of residents.
To sum up, there are various causes of the high rationale of people going on with the smoking habit. However, enforcing laws on the public or intervening in the community's consciousness by some programs should be taken to tackle this issue as soon as possible.
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 5, column 329, Rule ID: SENT_START_CONJUNCTIVE_LINKING_ADVERB_COMMA[1]
Message: Did you forget a comma after a conjunctive/linking adverb?
Suggestion: Hence,
...rder to stop the influx of new smokers. Hence some strict punishments should be taken...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, first, firstly, hence, however, if, second, secondly, so, still, well, for example, as well as, to begin with, to sum up
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 16.0 13.1623246493 122% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 11.0 7.85571142285 140% => OK
Conjunction : 9.0 10.4138276553 86% => OK
Relative clauses : 7.0 7.30460921844 96% => OK
Pronoun: 17.0 24.0651302605 71% => OK
Preposition: 65.0 41.998997996 155% => OK
Nominalization: 3.0 8.3376753507 36% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1811.0 1615.20841683 112% => OK
No of words: 356.0 315.596192385 113% => OK
Chars per words: 5.08707865169 5.12529762239 99% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.34372677135 4.20363070211 103% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.76616086683 2.80592935109 99% => OK
Unique words: 205.0 176.041082164 116% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.575842696629 0.561755894193 103% => OK
syllable_count: 567.9 506.74238477 112% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 5.43587174349 55% => OK
Article: 4.0 2.52805611222 158% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 3.0 0.809619238477 371% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 4.0 4.76152304609 84% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 16.0721442886 81% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 27.0 20.2975951904 133% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 61.4894035226 49.4020404114 124% => OK
Chars per sentence: 139.307692308 106.682146367 131% => OK
Words per sentence: 27.3846153846 20.7667163134 132% => OK
Discourse Markers: 9.61538461538 7.06120827912 136% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.01903807615 20% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 3.0 8.67935871743 35% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 8.0 3.9879759519 201% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.4128256513 59% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.191345705573 0.244688304435 78% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0728261672664 0.084324248473 86% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0640516841812 0.0667982634062 96% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.134217190351 0.151304729494 89% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0755870024434 0.056905535591 133% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 16.2 13.0946893788 124% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 44.07 50.2224549098 88% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 13.8 11.3001002004 122% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.54 12.4159519038 101% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.54 8.58950901804 111% => OK
difficult_words: 103.0 78.4519038076 131% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 14.0 9.78957915832 143% => OK
gunning_fog: 12.8 10.1190380762 126% => OK
text_standard: 14.0 10.7795591182 130% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 84.2696629213 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.5 Out of 9
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