Nowadays, more and more people smoke although they somehow acknowledge the adverse effects smoking has on their health, especially their lung functions. The 2 most possible reasons explaining this problem are personal preferences and the addictive quality of tobacco. As a result, there are 2 main possible solutions for society to gradually attenuate smoking: propaganda and implementing regulations.
There are 2 reasonable explanations for many people to continue smoking despite knowing about the severe consequences. Firstly, these people do not have enough courage and determination to get rid of using cigarettes. According to some research carried out by the United Nations, 1 out of 20 tobacco addicts can refrain from consuming them, the other 19 people might spend their whole life on using and suffering from the threats posed by smoking. Those addictions may have to use drugs for being conscious to work or study, some of them might smoke to release stress from workloads or financial burdens. Even though there must be some healthy solutions for their problems such as doing exercises or having vacations, they keep the dangerous smoking habit and end up succumbing to the severe effects. Secondly, the addictive characteristics of tobacco also influence people in becoming obsessed, which are proven in many scientific studies.
One viable solution for this problem is for social organizations to convey messages about the hazardous threat posed by sequential smoking as well as some practical methods to shake off this habit. At schools and workplaces, educators and managers should organize some presentations or extra-curriculum activities for students and employees to learn, understand about smoking, therefore edifice about the solutions. Another feasible way is for the government to apply strict policies on smoking. Take Vietnam for example, in the last 5 years, after strongly tariffing on tobacco, the number of smokers has considerably plunged. Additionally, the governments can also enforce harsh fines on public smokers.
In conclusion, the 2 main reasons for a large group of people to keep smoking habit are personal determination as well as the addictiveness of cigarettes. To reduce social smoking, the first solution is about education, the second one is to rigorously penalize.
Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, first, firstly, if, may, second, secondly, so, therefore, well, for example, in conclusion, such as, as a result, as well as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 11.0 13.1623246493 84% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 7.0 7.85571142285 89% => OK
Conjunction : 13.0 10.4138276553 125% => OK
Relative clauses : 1.0 7.30460921844 14% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 13.0 24.0651302605 54% => OK
Preposition: 49.0 41.998997996 117% => OK
Nominalization: 7.0 8.3376753507 84% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1966.0 1615.20841683 122% => OK
No of words: 357.0 315.596192385 113% => OK
Chars per words: 5.50700280112 5.12529762239 107% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.34677393335 4.20363070211 103% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.99345560639 2.80592935109 107% => OK
Unique words: 215.0 176.041082164 122% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.602240896359 0.561755894193 107% => OK
syllable_count: 606.6 506.74238477 120% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 5.43587174349 55% => OK
Article: 8.0 2.52805611222 316% => Less articles wanted as sentence beginning.
Subordination: 3.0 2.10420841683 143% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 6.0 4.76152304609 126% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 16.0 16.0721442886 100% => OK
Sentence length: 22.0 20.2975951904 108% => OK
Sentence length SD: 45.0221733566 49.4020404114 91% => OK
Chars per sentence: 122.875 106.682146367 115% => OK
Words per sentence: 22.3125 20.7667163134 107% => OK
Discourse Markers: 8.125 7.06120827912 115% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 5.01903807615 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 5.0 8.67935871743 58% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 10.0 3.9879759519 251% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.224198897324 0.244688304435 92% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0731662305638 0.084324248473 87% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0574802862039 0.0667982634062 86% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.138563573115 0.151304729494 92% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0141215707611 0.056905535591 25% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 15.7 13.0946893788 120% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 40.69 50.2224549098 81% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 13.1 11.3001002004 116% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 14.97 12.4159519038 121% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.77 8.58950901804 114% => OK
difficult_words: 114.0 78.4519038076 145% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 9.0 9.78957915832 92% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.8 10.1190380762 107% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 89.8876404494 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 8.0 Out of 9
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