despite advances in agriculture, many people in the world are still hungry. why is this so? what are the solutions?
Despite improvement in agriculture, a lot of people all over the world still starve. This essay will analyze why this is so and propose a solution.
Unarguably there has been a boost in agriculture in terms of technology and infrastructure, nonetheless, many people are still hungry. A major culprit to this trend is shortage in food supply as demands far exceeds supply; only a fraction of the populace embrace farming. How can the resulting produce feed the ever growing population? In a recent survey done by prof. Marculey N. of Federal university of Technology Mina on involvement of Agricultural practices among house holds in the six geopolitical zones Nigeria, a shocking out come of 21% did one farming method or the other. Little wonder why people still go hungry in recent times.
Another cause of starvation is persistent increase in industrialization as lands are no longer available for cultivation, resulting in to excessive use of existing farmlands. Traditional method of fallowing to improve soil quality is no longer practiced and consequently, there is poor harvest leading to food shortage and hunger.
To curb this menace, the government at all levels must initiate and sustain a 'Live Green' initiative where every household should be encouraged to plant a tree and keep gardens. Financial grants such as loans should be accorded to young graduates to make farming attractive, while enormous lands should be allotted solely for agricultural purposes.
In summary,while inadequate food production resulting from lack of motivation and unavailability of farming spaces are the major cause of hunger, provision of financial support and allocation of land for agricultural purposes will cushion this effect.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
consequently, nonetheless, so, still, while, in summary, such as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 12.0 13.1623246493 91% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 7.0 7.85571142285 89% => OK
Conjunction : 9.0 10.4138276553 86% => OK
Relative clauses : 1.0 7.30460921844 14% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 5.0 24.0651302605 21% => OK
Preposition: 41.0 41.998997996 98% => OK
Nominalization: 12.0 8.3376753507 144% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1465.0 1615.20841683 91% => OK
No of words: 272.0 315.596192385 86% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.38602941176 5.12529762239 105% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.06108636974 4.20363070211 97% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.12242757444 2.80592935109 111% => OK
Unique words: 176.0 176.041082164 100% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.647058823529 0.561755894193 115% => OK
syllable_count: 472.5 506.74238477 93% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 1.0 5.43587174349 18% => OK
Article: 4.0 2.52805611222 158% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 4.76152304609 105% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 16.0721442886 81% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 20.0 20.2975951904 99% => OK
Sentence length SD: 68.5042826011 49.4020404114 139% => OK
Chars per sentence: 112.692307692 106.682146367 106% => OK
Words per sentence: 20.9230769231 20.7667163134 101% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.92307692308 7.06120827912 70% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.38176352705 114% => OK
Language errors: 5.0 5.01903807615 100% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 8.67935871743 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 3.9879759519 100% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.4128256513 88% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.23381280032 0.244688304435 96% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0735367860745 0.084324248473 87% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.089493555061 0.0667982634062 134% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.122366178706 0.151304729494 81% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.120530795821 0.056905535591 212% => More connections among paragraphs wanted.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.4 13.0946893788 110% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 42.72 50.2224549098 85% => OK
smog_index: 11.2 7.44779559118 150% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 12.3 11.3001002004 109% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.98 12.4159519038 113% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 10.03 8.58950901804 117% => OK
difficult_words: 93.0 78.4519038076 119% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 9.78957915832 82% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.0 10.1190380762 99% => OK
text_standard: 14.0 10.7795591182 130% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 89.8876404494 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 8.0 Out of 9
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