Despite the best efforts of crime-fighting organizations, crime will never be eradicated from civilized society. To what extent do you agree with this view?
Society witness the increasing rate of crime all over the world. Though many organizations started to address this issue and come up with plans to decrease crime percentage, the change is hardly noticed. After such organizations came into existence the changes that occurred are discussed below.
First of all, taking this issue to roots, anything that is lacking to a person leads him/her to commit a crime. The platform to get criminal nature is laid in childhood itself. Abusive dominion parents, teachers and surroundings are responsible in building such individuals. The same is proven by Netherlands recent survey, according to the report, over 78% of the criminals are from background of parents that are anxious and ill-treated their children when they failed to meet their expectations. Remaining 20% choose crime to satisfy their money lust. Whereas, the other 2% are people whose parents are busy in their career planning and never actually attended to the child's physical, emotional and moral needs.
In order to decrease the percentage of criminals many institutions like rehabilitation centres came into spotlight. Subsequently, they rehabilitate the criminals in prison. Actually, the main reason these organizations couldn't eradicate crime is because the root to such behaviour is ignored. Though the criminals respond to the rehabilitation the mentally wounded people outside the prisons and rehabilitation centers remain same. Even though, these institutions turn to such children, parents will not send the troubled children to these as they feel it will degrade their status and reputation.
In my opinion, these crime fighting organizations should turn to children mental health development from school level itself. This ensures good start of child's life with values, ethics and acceptance rather than treating criminals. Mother Teresa quoted "It is easier to build a child than repairing an adult".
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Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 12.0 13.1623246493 91% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 3.0 7.85571142285 38% => OK
Conjunction : 8.0 10.4138276553 77% => OK
Relative clauses : 5.0 7.30460921844 68% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 25.0 24.0651302605 104% => OK
Preposition: 43.0 41.998997996 102% => OK
Nominalization: 7.0 8.3376753507 84% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1625.0 1615.20841683 101% => OK
No of words: 291.0 315.596192385 92% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.58419243986 5.12529762239 109% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.13022058845 4.20363070211 98% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.8995821544 2.80592935109 103% => OK
Unique words: 180.0 176.041082164 102% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.618556701031 0.561755894193 110% => OK
syllable_count: 489.6 506.74238477 97% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 5.43587174349 92% => OK
Article: 4.0 2.52805611222 158% => OK
Subordination: 4.0 2.10420841683 190% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 4.76152304609 105% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 17.0 16.0721442886 106% => OK
Sentence length: 17.0 20.2975951904 84% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 42.5143167419 49.4020404114 86% => OK
Chars per sentence: 95.5882352941 106.682146367 90% => OK
Words per sentence: 17.1176470588 20.7667163134 82% => OK
Discourse Markers: 3.58823529412 7.06120827912 51% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 11.0 5.01903807615 219% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 4.0 8.67935871743 46% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 12.0 3.9879759519 301% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.141799971112 0.244688304435 58% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0429878838463 0.084324248473 51% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.044363561914 0.0667982634062 66% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.087808434638 0.151304729494 58% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0221572994429 0.056905535591 39% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.4 13.0946893788 102% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 45.76 50.2224549098 91% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.1 11.3001002004 98% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 14.79 12.4159519038 119% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.2 8.58950901804 107% => OK
difficult_words: 87.0 78.4519038076 111% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 6.5 9.78957915832 66% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.8 10.1190380762 87% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 84.2696629213 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.5 Out of 9
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